Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/3/16, 6:40 PM
Hot imagery (esp the picture attached), but there could have been a lot more substance to appeal. The image of the police officer in the gym in compression clothes was hot, but there was nothing else beside that.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 5:57 PM
There is nothing wrong here with this story...it's simply another kind of Sado-Masochism...so my guess is that people into sado-masochism will appreciate it...
xORRiNx
6/3/16, 5:03 PM
THANKS EVERYONE FOR THE FEEDBACK! I'd say between here and the e-mails it's about 50/50 love it/don't like it. I'll say that this is probably the most "out there" theme I'll write. I plan on continuing the BRO series now... followed by my planned race domination theme story after that (gay). My whole thing with this story was... have you ever found a particular homophobe to be hot? I have. Not the homophobe part but the physical part... how they're so "bad" and attractive. I guess I was thinking of a guy in my past when I wrote it. :P
Anonymous
6/3/16, 4:36 PM
If Hannah drank it, would her vagina get bigger?
6/3/16, 4:22 PM
Well written, as usual, and brimming with potential for a sequel. (Logan is entirely aware something unnatural went on, Hannah may have gotten more than she wished and what exactly is her dad's secret?)
Anonymous
6/3/16, 4:18 PM
Would have been better if Logan was actually into rough homophobes and Matt started using him.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 3:44 PM
New chapter please!!!
Anonymous
6/3/16, 3:05 PM
Sequel idea: Logan gets a serum that makes Hannah a lesbian as revenge.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 2:56 PM
maybe someone gave orrin this serum XD
Ragnarok
6/3/16, 2:50 PM
Very well written and I have liked many stories by this author before like Top to Bottom, however this is just not for probably 95% of us readers on this site. Please consider posting it and the Straight Bro series you are writing elsewhere though, because I am sure they would get higher praise and be better received from a different less gay audience.