Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/9/16, 2:55 PM
It would be interesting if the pen fell into the hands of a gay couple who discover its powers accidentally, but then decide to use the pen to spice up their waning sex life, changing each other and letting their fantasies come to life. I could see the changes becoming a kind of feedback loop making the changes get more and more kinky as they went along. Eventually they would completely transform themselves and have to be picked up by the pen's master.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 2:52 PM
Excellent work...great continuation!@
Anonymous
4/9/16, 7:17 AM
Got me goin good ;)
Apr 9, 2016
Anonymous
4/9/16, 7:06 AM
Yay! A great dilf story! How about a second part? I'm interested how this relationship develops. Louis can't sneak away from his wife and kids forever.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 5:22 AM
Can't get enough of your stories.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 1:51 AM
Lovely story! Sorry that I hadn't noticed it before
Anonymous
4/9/16, 12:24 AM
HOPE THE AUTHOR FINDS THE TIME TO COMPLETE THIS EXCITING STORY WITH CHAPTER 8....WE'VE BEEN WAITING [FAITHFULLY] FOR A FEW MONTHS FOR THE EXCITING CONCLUSION....PLEASE ORRIN, GIVE US THE ENDING.......
Anonymous
4/9/16, 12:22 AM
Not only did the author never say "ASAP" but he has stated now numerous times that school and other issues are a first priority. So many of you whine about another chapter, revealing that you all only think of yourselves and your needs for self-gratification. Lay off the author until at least the end of the school semester (late May).
BadDirtyTrickster
4/9/16, 12:14 AM
Great start, man! Really hot stuff. Hope to see more from you.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 12:12 AM
IT'S BEEN WELL OVER A MONTH SINCE THE AUTHOR SAID THE NEXT CHAPTER [#8]...WAS A.S.A.P.....HOPE EVERYTHING IS O.K....& SOMEDAY THERE IS A CHAPTER 8........