Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/9/16, 1:51 AM
Lovely story! Sorry that I hadn't noticed it before
Anonymous
4/9/16, 12:24 AM
HOPE THE AUTHOR FINDS THE TIME TO COMPLETE THIS EXCITING STORY WITH CHAPTER 8....WE'VE BEEN WAITING [FAITHFULLY] FOR A FEW MONTHS FOR THE EXCITING CONCLUSION....PLEASE ORRIN, GIVE US THE ENDING.......
Anonymous
4/9/16, 12:22 AM
Not only did the author never say "ASAP" but he has stated now numerous times that school and other issues are a first priority. So many of you whine about another chapter, revealing that you all only think of yourselves and your needs for self-gratification. Lay off the author until at least the end of the school semester (late May).
BadDirtyTrickster
4/9/16, 12:14 AM
Great start, man! Really hot stuff. Hope to see more from you.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 12:12 AM
IT'S BEEN WELL OVER A MONTH SINCE THE AUTHOR SAID THE NEXT CHAPTER [#8]...WAS A.S.A.P.....HOPE EVERYTHING IS O.K....& SOMEDAY THERE IS A CHAPTER 8........
Anonymous
4/9/16, 12:02 AM
LOVED IT
Anonymous
4/8/16, 10:57 PM
Please make him hairy!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 10:25 PM
Love Amon Amarth! Nice to meet a fan!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 9:48 PM
LOVE STORIES WHERE A BRO BECOMES A STUPID JOCK....KEEP IT UP !
Oct 20, 2005
Anonymous
4/8/16, 9:19 PM
I know this story is old as hell but Navy Seals are not Marines. They are two separate parts of the military. With one simple Google search you could have figured this out. It really brought me out of the story because he kept switching branches of the military.