Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/8/16, 10:25 PM
Love Amon Amarth! Nice to meet a fan!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 9:48 PM
LOVE STORIES WHERE A BRO BECOMES A STUPID JOCK....KEEP IT UP !
Oct 20, 2005
Anonymous
4/8/16, 9:19 PM
I know this story is old as hell but Navy Seals are not Marines. They are two separate parts of the military. With one simple Google search you could have figured this out. It really brought me out of the story because he kept switching branches of the military.
Anonymous
4/8/16, 7:47 PM
Great story! Def got hard!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 4:59 PM
The fact that it reads "rushed" is what makes this story captivating. The substance was intriguing. Form will come to you. Remember, you write in 10 minutes. Then you edit for 3 hours.
Original Poster
4/8/16, 4:44 PM
Thanks everyone :) I wrote this super late so it's kinda sloppy lol. It's based off my own personal fantasies so I'm glad you like it!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 4:08 PM
This story was amazing! Please write more!
cutlerfan
4/8/16, 4:01 PM
Loved it. Wonderful idea about the pen rewriting the guy's body and mind!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 3:59 PM
Awesome story man! Hope you keep writing! What does everyone think of Amon Amarth's new album? Pretty good, eh?
Anonymous
4/8/16, 3:56 PM
Great first try! Please keep going bro!