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Anonymous
4/8/16, 7:47 PM
Great story! Def got hard!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 4:59 PM
The fact that it reads "rushed" is what makes this story captivating. The substance was intriguing. Form will come to you. Remember, you write in 10 minutes. Then you edit for 3 hours.
Original Poster
4/8/16, 4:44 PM
Thanks everyone :) I wrote this super late so it's kinda sloppy lol. It's based off my own personal fantasies so I'm glad you like it!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 4:08 PM
This story was amazing! Please write more!
cutlerfan
4/8/16, 4:01 PM
Loved it. Wonderful idea about the pen rewriting the guy's body and mind!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 3:59 PM
Awesome story man! Hope you keep writing! What does everyone think of Amon Amarth's new album? Pretty good, eh?
Anonymous
4/8/16, 3:56 PM
Great first try! Please keep going bro!
cutlerfan
4/8/16, 3:54 PM
Great Story! I love the change making him dumber and under control.
Leathered
4/8/16, 1:48 PM
Thanks for finishing the story. Davis is now in a good place. Hope to see more of your stories soon.
Anonymous
4/8/16, 11:15 AM
Very nice first try!