Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/7/16, 9:22 PM
Excellent story!!
Lenny
4/7/16, 9:12 PM
thanks Tattcub
Anonymous
4/7/16, 8:59 PM
Thank /you/ for the horny read. Really like the implications of the ending. I sure would partake in the "poison"!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 7:59 PM
That was very hot!
Viridian
4/7/16, 7:25 PM
I liked this. The writing has a nice flow to it and the idea is fun, but precisely because it was good it made me want more. With something like three times the current length you could have really gotten into their heads and made us feel the changes, making the characters more like people and less like clay being shaped. Also, the change from the guy being transformed into a potent and aware reality shifter seemed a bit hurried. Overall, a good story. Thank you.
Anonymous
4/7/16, 5:44 PM
Very nice. I could see this becoming a series with other boys. Would love to see the blue ink used for more transformations. I loved the part when he made the boy's ass self lubing, want to see more stuff like that.
Anonymous
4/7/16, 4:54 PM
hot
Lenny
4/7/16, 4:03 PM
Some hellish aspects to this story will happen. Ben will not end up a pig though. I developed my plans for how to finish the story. I have two chapters on my laptop I will post tonight. I have ideas for about 4 more chapters after that with a twist ending in mind.
Amalianetwork
4/7/16, 3:37 PM
Great first story! Grammar and spelling was pretty much correct. I would suggest separating paragraphs. The content was great though! Hope to see more!
Hypnotic Subjugation
4/7/16, 3:18 PM
So great! Followed the series from beginning to end and I must say I loved the slow progression of Davis' brainwashing.