Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/5/16, 5:01 AM
I just read both stories. Damn!!!
Anonymous
4/5/16, 4:17 AM
Man, I would totally read a novel version of this. I love the detective mystery/ gay erotica mix. You should expand this story and sell it!
EricMason
4/5/16, 3:18 AM
It gets better and better!
lenny
4/5/16, 1:56 AM
Thanks cutlerfan.
cutlerfan
4/5/16, 12:02 AM
Very interesting. Don't let the comments get you down. However long it is..is fine. Sometimes I have posted a shorter story bit just to get it down on the net. It is better than waiting to complete a longer chapter that you're not sure when you will finish.
Anonymous
4/4/16, 9:09 PM
MUCH TOO SHORT, MORE LIKE A PARAGRAPH THAN A CHAPTER.......
Anonymous
4/4/16, 9:03 PM
Promising indeed. Want to hear more.
Anonymous
4/4/16, 9:02 PM
This is an excellent start, and I love the possibilities suggested by the initial paragraphs. However, as the above posters say, it's much too short. Let it sit for a while, play around with it and come back later when you've got a decent length.
Anonymous
4/4/16, 6:02 PM
Yay!!! this sounds promising! but please, add more detailed descriptions of clothing, body and add some naughty dialogues! your story could be great!
TimNJ
4/4/16, 5:39 PM
Or write 2 chapters and combine them. This is too short, but it has a fantastic premise and I look forward to the additional entries.