Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/4/16, 4:29 PM
If a chapter is less than 1200 words, you're wasting time. Believe it or not, this is creative writing. Be creative. Let thoughts develop. Then, edit, edit, edit. The length will come.
Anonymous
4/4/16, 3:12 PM
Boys sucking cock while cumming in their diapers, such good boys...
Lenny
4/4/16, 2:56 PM
This was the Intro,chapters will be longer, but as a new writer I may be shorter then some, thanks
Anonymous
4/4/16, 2:54 PM
Great start & looking forward to where this might go, but extremely short to be posted here. This is barely a first page rather than a first chapter.... great for a Work-in-progress site like the CYOC, but might disappoint readers here just due to the short length. Length aside though - Hope you continue it!
BankStreet
4/4/16, 11:45 AM
Yes ... disgusting. More, please.
Ed
4/4/16, 6:18 AM
Just gotta say...WOW
Anonymous
4/4/16, 4:28 AM
Very hot. Love spandex and mind control stories. This story is one of your best ones.
Anonymous
4/3/16, 9:58 PM
Me encanta la temática egipcia :D ¡Gran historia!
Anonymous
4/3/16, 8:48 PM
This is great so far. I'm really enjoying him give the guy some arrogance and can't wait to see where that goes.
Anonymous
4/3/16, 6:20 PM
Still disgusting. More!