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Anonymous
3/30/16, 9:41 PM
Of course this story requires many more chapters! The more the merrier! Please move on!
EdIam
3/30/16, 8:55 PM
I'll admit I didn't finish my first story, no real excuse for that other than losing interest. This story, however, I'm very interested in. The problem, however, is I'm INSANELY busy with VERY little free time due to being a full time student and working doubles every weekend. The small amount of free time I get is generally spent with friends or family or relaxing doing activities that require very little thinking...which doesn't include my writing. I assure you, Mordred, I will continue. I just don't want to put something out there I'm not proud of and I can't create something I'm proud of with the very limited free time I have. I appreciate all of you that want a continuation RIGHT NOW, but I'm afraid I can't fulfill that at this time. Soon, I hope, as April's load will mostly be tests and those don't require as much preparation or work as the presentations, papers, and clinical hours I have to complete do.
rubbrsome
3/30/16, 8:52 PM
I used to love reading the stories on rubberzone. But I haven't had the chance to visit that site in so long, I wouldn't know what to recommend.
Anonymous
3/30/16, 8:25 PM
Neil spent much of the evening "tasting" his newly-acquired slaves: going from one foreman to next, savouring their mouth, dick, ass, FEET and all over their bodies. The guys remained STANDING at attention for the entire night in their obscene outfit as their bodies are being helplessly molested by Neil. OH my! Did that mean Neil take their boots and socks one by one and savored the bare feet? Also did that mean that Neil crouched so as to lick their toes when they were standing???? Anyway, good chapter!
Anonymous
3/30/16, 8:10 PM
Say, which stories from rubberzone would you strongly recommend in their forum?
Mordred
3/30/16, 7:37 PM
I never said I wouldn't be waiting. Just all the evidence points to him not finishing this story. That's all I'm sayi g
Anonymous
3/30/16, 7:30 PM
Thanks for your wry observation. But I love EdIam. Waiting for someone you love costs/takes nothing at all. So I will continue waiting, period.
Anonymous
3/30/16, 7:23 PM
Great! I reminisce about Ray and Mike... lol probably they will be back accompanied with more hunk slaves for the next chapter. But are you going to depict Neil's scheme in the same fashion from then on? Focusing on some men and making them more sexually-detailed is also adorable.
Anonymous
3/30/16, 7:16 PM
Tomozco!!! Great to see you back again! With another masterpiece! This one is even greater! Here are some of my feedback: 1. It's a very great try to expand the harem! Excellent! Seeing more slaves is more fun! At first I thought 12 slaves might make the storyline too brief... but you actually dealt with it well... though I would still appreciate more information about those workers... hey... you also talked about Handid family and its forthcoming slaves, right? So there will be sequels with ever-increasing size of harem... what about trying people of all walks of life? Like more cops? soldiers? Gangs (with a hunk gangleader) are even better! 2. The bug about shitting doesn't annoy me at all. But I really care about the details of the foot fetish plots. Like, I really want those plots about taking off socks, admiring the bare feet (with abundant information about the related description). I mean, when those workers are worshipped by Frank or Gablo, are they barefooted? 3. Since the main character is Neil, it will be better if we can see more about Neil's enjoying/playing with his slaves and their bodies. So you did quite amazing two parts! One is when the workers are examined at Neil's home! The other is when the workers are "in the meeting" and Neil sneaked in and had some little fun. These two parts are just too good, but too insufficient. We need more about something like that!
Mar 20, 2015
scudder
3/30/16, 6:27 PM
Will this hot story ever get a part 2?