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tomozco
3/30/16, 10:02 PM
I'm not sure how it got there either. I didn't put those tags in and it's not even in any part of the story. Is there anyway to remove it?
tomozco
3/30/16, 9:51 PM
Wow...thanks for all the detailed comments guys! I didn't expect that many feedback so fast! For those of you that mentioned about this part being too brief with too many people...the original intent was that this was going to be one of a series of anecdotal "vignettes"/short overviews on Neil's achievements outside of the two core families. Hence the plots were a bit more generalized and these other side characters are more anonymous, but the end product was lengthy enough to be it's own chapter so that's how I left it. My plan is to develop a similar plot for each member of both Stanton and Hadid families (a group of men being brought into Neil's control due to their connections), so stay tuned!!! For the toilet thing....that's my bad. I did realize about the "inconvenience" that some of you raised, I didn't really mean it to go that way. I could have refined it better. Oh well, some room for your imagination I guess... :p
Anonymous
3/30/16, 9:41 PM
Of course this story requires many more chapters! The more the merrier! Please move on!
EdIam
3/30/16, 8:55 PM
I'll admit I didn't finish my first story, no real excuse for that other than losing interest. This story, however, I'm very interested in. The problem, however, is I'm INSANELY busy with VERY little free time due to being a full time student and working doubles every weekend. The small amount of free time I get is generally spent with friends or family or relaxing doing activities that require very little thinking...which doesn't include my writing. I assure you, Mordred, I will continue. I just don't want to put something out there I'm not proud of and I can't create something I'm proud of with the very limited free time I have. I appreciate all of you that want a continuation RIGHT NOW, but I'm afraid I can't fulfill that at this time. Soon, I hope, as April's load will mostly be tests and those don't require as much preparation or work as the presentations, papers, and clinical hours I have to complete do.
rubbrsome
3/30/16, 8:52 PM
I used to love reading the stories on rubberzone. But I haven't had the chance to visit that site in so long, I wouldn't know what to recommend.
Anonymous
3/30/16, 8:25 PM
Neil spent much of the evening "tasting" his newly-acquired slaves: going from one foreman to next, savouring their mouth, dick, ass, FEET and all over their bodies. The guys remained STANDING at attention for the entire night in their obscene outfit as their bodies are being helplessly molested by Neil. OH my! Did that mean Neil take their boots and socks one by one and savored the bare feet? Also did that mean that Neil crouched so as to lick their toes when they were standing???? Anyway, good chapter!
Anonymous
3/30/16, 8:10 PM
Say, which stories from rubberzone would you strongly recommend in their forum?
Mordred
3/30/16, 7:37 PM
I never said I wouldn't be waiting. Just all the evidence points to him not finishing this story. That's all I'm sayi g
Anonymous
3/30/16, 7:30 PM
Thanks for your wry observation. But I love EdIam. Waiting for someone you love costs/takes nothing at all. So I will continue waiting, period.
Anonymous
3/30/16, 7:23 PM
Great! I reminisce about Ray and Mike... lol probably they will be back accompanied with more hunk slaves for the next chapter. But are you going to depict Neil's scheme in the same fashion from then on? Focusing on some men and making them more sexually-detailed is also adorable.