Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/30/16, 7:16 PM
Tomozco!!! Great to see you back again! With another masterpiece! This one is even greater! Here are some of my feedback: 1. It's a very great try to expand the harem! Excellent! Seeing more slaves is more fun! At first I thought 12 slaves might make the storyline too brief... but you actually dealt with it well... though I would still appreciate more information about those workers... hey... you also talked about Handid family and its forthcoming slaves, right? So there will be sequels with ever-increasing size of harem... what about trying people of all walks of life? Like more cops? soldiers? Gangs (with a hunk gangleader) are even better! 2. The bug about shitting doesn't annoy me at all. But I really care about the details of the foot fetish plots. Like, I really want those plots about taking off socks, admiring the bare feet (with abundant information about the related description). I mean, when those workers are worshipped by Frank or Gablo, are they barefooted? 3. Since the main character is Neil, it will be better if we can see more about Neil's enjoying/playing with his slaves and their bodies. So you did quite amazing two parts! One is when the workers are examined at Neil's home! The other is when the workers are "in the meeting" and Neil sneaked in and had some little fun. These two parts are just too good, but too insufficient. We need more about something like that!
Mar 20, 2015
scudder
3/30/16, 6:27 PM
Will this hot story ever get a part 2?
alx62
3/30/16, 5:43 PM
excellent felt myself being there cum a few times also but also not turned in to a rubber drone
Anonymous
3/30/16, 5:33 PM
Yeah... Where do they shit? That's been bugging me the entire time. Don't tell me they ate it...
Sep 21, 2014
Viridian
3/30/16, 1:19 PM
Thank you! :-)
Anonymous
3/30/16, 1:14 PM
No toilets? Where do they shit? :S
Viridian
3/30/16, 1:12 PM
Thank you for this: I've read it several times. The budding bromance and the generally *nice* feel make this story stand out.
Anonymous
3/30/16, 12:57 PM
Would really love to see these made into male on male time freeze porn films
Mordred
3/30/16, 12:22 PM
I don't get why you all are shocked. He had another story he didn't finish either. It's what he does, he updates a few times and the story is great, then he just stops. I doubt we will see an update soon if at all
Anonymous
3/30/16, 11:08 AM
Fantastic, rubbrsome! I love the gradual crescendo emerging from the narrator's words - faster, more intense until he (and you) reach the climax. It seems so simple and yet I know it's very difficult thing that you have achieved expertly.