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stevenj
3/23/16, 7:45 PM
what a great chapter wish i were dean cant wait for more
Anonymous
3/23/16, 7:35 PM
Ah Ha! cop"s" ... the most marvelous thing I have been informed of now! Great!
BearBoi
3/23/16, 5:45 PM
People on this site can be hilariously catty and demanding sometimes I just hope Orrin's doing well enough to be writing happily even if it takes a while. But I do agree with the comments here asking for more mental struggle in the next chapter. (Looking forward to the gay redneck one too-- for some reason forced accent change is particularly super hot to me.)
Anonymous
3/23/16, 8:38 AM
HOT!!!
Anonymous
3/23/16, 8:30 AM
Grammar ruined this for me....was terrible :/
tjtj
3/23/16, 4:11 AM
Hot story, but a couple of misspelling is kinda distracting. Like the last part, his phone went ON not off.
Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/23/16, 3:41 AM
Very nice! I would've wanted the transition to be more drawn out, but the sensuousness you've created is very nice!
Anonymous
3/23/16, 1:21 AM
Amazing end to this story! Can't wait to see more, Baralai!
Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/23/16, 1:00 AM
Fantastic! I want to see what happens to him in terms of his new look. How will he change his appearance to please. AND what happened to the brother? How did such a young guy come to own such s big house? Looking forward to more stories if the series.
scudder
3/23/16, 12:35 AM
Hot, Hot. Hot, Always love a new Baralai story! Makes me wonder if Splooge is a hypnotic virus hidden in your paragraphs! Ruinu Inc, needs to expand to college campuses, fire stations, sports teams, politics. What's the hidden agenda of Ruinu? World domination?