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Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/22/16, 9:46 PM
a beautiful story.....well done
EdIam
3/22/16, 9:18 PM
I assure you all, I'm alive, well, and don't have any writers block. What I do lack, however, is free time. I'm in my final semester of nursing school, which means clinical hours, community service, preceptor hours, HUGE papers, and presentations...all while I'm also working so I can, like, pay my bills. Therefore, when I do get free time, it's generally spent studying, catching up on shows I'm addicted to (Daredevil season 2!!!), and seeing my friends who I don't want to neglect. I know it's been over three months, and I've worked on most of the next chapter, but I want to make it rather super-sized, amazing, and what you all have come to expect before submitting it. I assure you, though, I haven't given up. The fantasies I have for the Hendersons, the Smiths, the cops, and the next group to be Re-Educated (no spoilers!!) are exciting to me and I want to share them all with you...but only when I feel like it's up to the standards of the previous 7 chapters. Alex will return with more evil plans. And I adore how much you all want to see it continued!!! As always, feel free to e-mail me and I'll try to get back to you to keep you satiated and prepared for the surprise drop of Chapter 8 sometime soon. Love you guys!!!
Anonymous
3/22/16, 9:17 PM
This story is amazing, and I love love LOVE the slow transformation both of their bodies and their thoughts. This is hot as fuck!
Toro
3/22/16, 5:56 PM
Cannot wait to see more of this!!!
Anonymous
3/22/16, 5:55 PM
Well let's remember he does this for free... We appreciate you Orrin. Too much. These are so good! I'll perform sexual favours for your boss if they give you time off to write.
Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/22/16, 4:31 PM
Maybe a common scenario but done so hot and detailed. Love how you explored Topher's thought process and took time to establish his background and character, which always makes it so much sweeter to see his subjugation and transformation. I agree the detail about his feelings for his girlfriend fading away was very well done. You have real talent. I would definitely be interested in seeing this continue and seeing more of Riley's plans for Topher after his enslavement.
Mar 21, 2016
Malskin
3/22/16, 9:42 AM
liked this story a lot, the part of his girlfriend really liked. re comment with it being on Tumblr, we dont know if its the same writer- i for one would like to see the tumble blog
Anonymous
3/22/16, 9:04 AM
Great episode. I'd still like to see Silas 'accidentally' turned into a slut at the end of the whole thing. Maybe have his drink sabotaged by some of the employees who were uncomfortable with the way Oliver was degraded when he was led around the office on all fours. ... But you've called it the Epilogue so I guess I might have to beat off on that scenario all on my own!
JimSSkin
3/22/16, 8:22 AM
I honestly have never been on CYOC, if it the same story as on there then I do apologize for it being the same even though it unintentional.
Anonymous
3/22/16, 7:09 AM
Thanks for give us a last instalment! This was great as always, and I like Drew. He seems so out of control that is simply irresistible. I've misses more description of new debasing clothing, but the action was fantastic. I think this is my favourite series, it is so erotic and hot!!!