Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/23/16, 8:38 AM
HOT!!!
Anonymous
3/23/16, 8:30 AM
Grammar ruined this for me....was terrible :/
tjtj
3/23/16, 4:11 AM
Hot story, but a couple of misspelling is kinda distracting. Like the last part, his phone went ON not off.
Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/23/16, 3:41 AM
Very nice! I would've wanted the transition to be more drawn out, but the sensuousness you've created is very nice!
Anonymous
3/23/16, 1:21 AM
Amazing end to this story! Can't wait to see more, Baralai!
Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/23/16, 1:00 AM
Fantastic! I want to see what happens to him in terms of his new look. How will he change his appearance to please. AND what happened to the brother? How did such a young guy come to own such s big house? Looking forward to more stories if the series.
scudder
3/23/16, 12:35 AM
Hot, Hot. Hot, Always love a new Baralai story! Makes me wonder if Splooge is a hypnotic virus hidden in your paragraphs! Ruinu Inc, needs to expand to college campuses, fire stations, sports teams, politics. What's the hidden agenda of Ruinu? World domination?
Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/22/16, 9:46 PM
a beautiful story.....well done
EdIam
3/22/16, 9:18 PM
I assure you all, I'm alive, well, and don't have any writers block. What I do lack, however, is free time. I'm in my final semester of nursing school, which means clinical hours, community service, preceptor hours, HUGE papers, and presentations...all while I'm also working so I can, like, pay my bills. Therefore, when I do get free time, it's generally spent studying, catching up on shows I'm addicted to (Daredevil season 2!!!), and seeing my friends who I don't want to neglect. I know it's been over three months, and I've worked on most of the next chapter, but I want to make it rather super-sized, amazing, and what you all have come to expect before submitting it. I assure you, though, I haven't given up. The fantasies I have for the Hendersons, the Smiths, the cops, and the next group to be Re-Educated (no spoilers!!) are exciting to me and I want to share them all with you...but only when I feel like it's up to the standards of the previous 7 chapters. Alex will return with more evil plans. And I adore how much you all want to see it continued!!! As always, feel free to e-mail me and I'll try to get back to you to keep you satiated and prepared for the surprise drop of Chapter 8 sometime soon. Love you guys!!!
Anonymous
3/22/16, 9:17 PM
This story is amazing, and I love love LOVE the slow transformation both of their bodies and their thoughts. This is hot as fuck!