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8/14/24, 6:11 PM
i really love your writing. Where can i read more of your work. ??? I love it.

8/14/24, 7:14 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I have stories under the same author name at mcstories.com, and Literotica.com, most there will be FD stories to be honest. Thanks for the kind feedback it is appreciated!
8/14/24, 7:08 PM
Loving it! Keep up the good work!
8/14/24, 6:53 PM
Daddy bottom slave pls
8/14/24, 5:57 PM
Really loving this. Would like to meet this tist
8/14/24, 2:22 PM
Loved it!

8/14/24, 5:16 PM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Thanks for reading, glad you loved it! If you have any ideas for upcoming parts let me know!
Elm
8/14/24, 5:16 PM
Excellent story! Very good begining, loved all the inductions. Pat is going to become the perfect daddy 👍👍
8/14/24, 5:14 PM
I want the hypnotist to make me cum. i love this story. The hypnotic eroticism is so WONDERFUL. Thank you for going slowly and letting me feel the process. I love this. THANK YOU. Please keep writing. You are talented.
8/14/24, 5:10 PM
This is getting better and better! I love the slow burn of Jay's changing mindset and his increasing desire to want to be more like the missionaries. Great to see him in prayer and not quite understanding how it happened but knowing that he liked the feeling and experience - this is all positive and all heading in the right direction. Also loved the scene in which Jay had the desire to want to tidy up his room and how it just sort of felt 'right' to do that and how his attitude towards cleanliness, order and neatness was slowly taking over. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/14/24, 4:43 PM
Great seduction by smoking and very well crafted! More please.
8/14/24, 8:15 AM
This is warming up to be a great story. I really love Elder Goodie already and think he can make a positive difference to Jay's life and outlooks. Looking forward to some serious influencing and motivating from Elder Goodie to get Jay to change his ways and find joy in the way Elder Goodie has. I would love to see Jay reflecting on a change of appearance and taking a leaf out of Elder Goodie's book. Can't wait for the next chapter!

8/14/24, 4:14 PM
@[BSuited](/user/show/10003178) There is a 2nd chapter already