Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/18/16, 6:27 PM
Great story!!!
Anonymous
3/18/16, 1:54 PM
Always enjoy your writing. This story is really hot. Like the old site had I came twice! I miss that feature.
Anonymous
3/18/16, 9:50 AM
As I noted in my first comment, a CYOC story with more than one identified author (not just "Anonymous" posts) is not written by one human being. Perhaps the majority of this story was written by the poster and resubmitted here, but there is at least one part that has a different author.
Anonymous
3/18/16, 4:47 AM
It seems like a number of people are jumping to the conclusion that the poster is plagiarizing, with little to no proof. Why would you automatically assume this? Copy and pasting from another site doesn't automatically mean that the person stole the story. It might in fact be theirs.
Anonymous
3/18/16, 3:49 AM
I went there last night and this whole story is plagiarized exactly word for word.
Anonymous
3/18/16, 3:40 AM
Orrin???
Anonymous
3/18/16, 2:42 AM
Yes please continue!
Anonymous
3/18/16, 1:21 AM
Yup, Has been lifted from CYOC story. Almost word for word. I don't mind reposting as long as credit is given the original author or efforts made to ask permission to re-publish. Jimskin. Have a go of something yourself. It can be tough but it's way better than just lifting a story. Unless of course you did write it
Anonymous
3/17/16, 2:51 AM
Jimsskin: I like the idea of a 'normal' guy being 'transformed' into a skinhead...May I make a few suggestion's.The physical & mental changes should take place one at a time, rather than all at once. Also the bro should notice each change, but then 'forget' the change within minutes. This would make the story more 'erotic', giving the reader more time to 'get into the story. Also at some point the guy should slowly start to 'talk' or tell the story using skinhead words & phrases...For example Ryan should be shocked at the growth of his penis, but a few seconds later he should accept being 'big-dicked' as if he'd always been this way, etc......I hope you write other Skinhead stories Oi boy !
Anonymous
3/17/16, 2:48 AM
This entire story has been essentially plagiarized from CYOC: http://www.cyoc.net/interactives/chapter_43751.html. Because there is more than one author involved in the CYOC story progression, it seems unlikely that this is the author of all the story's parts.