Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/20/16, 3:40 AM
There are a handful of stories on this site that refuse to get out of my mind. This is one of them. I love the mood, the mysteriousness of it all. You want to be able to stare into Mr. Mercers eyes and let him take over. (Sorry to say part 2 lacks that mystery.) Wonderful story Whitechape1
Anonymous
3/20/16, 3:01 AM
It's not jumping to a conclusion. It is a lift from another post, have a look at the link and see it for yourself.. If it is shared work then state that. Share the praise and the critcism. If not then don't post without permission. That's unfair on the original author or authors.
Anonymous
3/19/16, 8:40 PM
While I like the progression of the story I don't particularly like what's becoming of Seth, mentally speaking. I'm also starting to feel really sorry for Dave.
Anonymous
3/19/16, 6:58 PM
This one also hot : ). Thanx
Anonymous
3/18/16, 8:58 PM
Orrin you're too good, I am dying waiting!
Anonymous
3/18/16, 6:27 PM
Great story!!!
Anonymous
3/18/16, 1:54 PM
Always enjoy your writing. This story is really hot. Like the old site had I came twice! I miss that feature.
Anonymous
3/18/16, 9:50 AM
As I noted in my first comment, a CYOC story with more than one identified author (not just "Anonymous" posts) is not written by one human being. Perhaps the majority of this story was written by the poster and resubmitted here, but there is at least one part that has a different author.
Anonymous
3/18/16, 4:47 AM
It seems like a number of people are jumping to the conclusion that the poster is plagiarizing, with little to no proof. Why would you automatically assume this? Copy and pasting from another site doesn't automatically mean that the person stole the story. It might in fact be theirs.
Anonymous
3/18/16, 3:49 AM
I went there last night and this whole story is plagiarized exactly word for word.