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Anonymous
3/18/16, 3:40 AM
Orrin???
Anonymous
3/18/16, 2:42 AM
Yes please continue!
Anonymous
3/18/16, 1:21 AM
Yup, Has been lifted from CYOC story. Almost word for word. I don't mind reposting as long as credit is given the original author or efforts made to ask permission to re-publish. Jimskin. Have a go of something yourself. It can be tough but it's way better than just lifting a story. Unless of course you did write it
Anonymous
3/17/16, 2:51 AM
Jimsskin: I like the idea of a 'normal' guy being 'transformed' into a skinhead...May I make a few suggestion's.The physical & mental changes should take place one at a time, rather than all at once. Also the bro should notice each change, but then 'forget' the change within minutes. This would make the story more 'erotic', giving the reader more time to 'get into the story. Also at some point the guy should slowly start to 'talk' or tell the story using skinhead words & phrases...For example Ryan should be shocked at the growth of his penis, but a few seconds later he should accept being 'big-dicked' as if he'd always been this way, etc......I hope you write other Skinhead stories Oi boy !
Anonymous
3/17/16, 2:48 AM
This entire story has been essentially plagiarized from CYOC: http://www.cyoc.net/interactives/chapter_43751.html. Because there is more than one author involved in the CYOC story progression, it seems unlikely that this is the author of all the story's parts.
Anonymous
3/16/16, 11:25 PM
We definitely need more for this!
A CONCERNED READER
3/16/16, 10:54 PM
.....AND MAKE THE COMPLETE RE-SUBMISSION [RE-WRITTEN]: LONGER...MUCH LONGER !!!
Anonymous
3/16/16, 10:52 PM
If this is short because it was org. on Tumblr: there's no reason you couldn't re-submit the entire group of chapters at once, as one decent length story....How about it ???
Jimsskin
3/16/16, 10:20 PM
I do apologise for the short chapters and am taking all suggestions and critiscm on board and will make sure my next story will be longer and better. This is originally written on Tumblr and I got told to post it here. Please keep the criticism and suggestions coming, much appreciated.
Jimsskin
3/16/16, 10:15 PM
Am taking all suggestions on board. Do apologise that each chapter is short. It originally on Tumblr. It is only my first story and thanks for the opinions etc.