Recent Comments

Jimsskin
3/16/16, 10:15 PM
Am taking all suggestions on board. Do apologise that each chapter is short. It originally on Tumblr. It is only my first story and thanks for the opinions etc.
Tez999
3/16/16, 3:12 PM
This is so hot! Wonderful
A San Francisco Reader
3/16/16, 6:46 AM
I hope the final chapter will be really long, with lots of 'interior' mind action in addition to more sex. Love it when the bro's suddenly forget they were ever straight & 'think-back' to the 'new way' they [think] they always were...Hope we make up for its lack in this chapter, by having a lot of Robbies new fem. behavior & lisping speech..How about some new sissy body language as well, [mincing-walk, fluttering hands, referring to other guy's as 'she' or 'her', taking a cute girls name..[Roberta ??]...Lets hope Adam becomes something of a controlling Bully in his relationship to Robbie. In the last chapter he called him, 'boy'...perhaps he should now be calling him 'bitch', since he's hot for Robbie's 'pussy-ass' ! Also I hope he gets another chance to 'proudly' walk around the campus showing-off his big dick. Adam & Robbie should end up 'bonding' with the two gay's who cursed them, so in the end, when they are given the chance to revert back, they reject it...preferring to stay their new [improved] stereotypical selves !
Avalon
3/16/16, 6:25 AM
Bae, I was sooo hyped, you could have done so much better than this! xoxox #ibelieveinyou
Fetboy
3/15/16, 9:25 PM
This site is for people who want to share hot stories for guys to jerk off to, right? While the story is good so far, it doesn't give anyone enough time to jerk off. Please write at least 2 chapters if you want to keep them small like this before uploading.
A San Francisco Reader
3/15/16, 7:59 PM
I love stories where a straight-laced lad is 'transformed' into a 'sexy/dirty-minded' SKINHEAD punk ! ...but these 'chapters' are so fucking short !!! As another reader has mentioned, these 'episodes' are much too short to cause any erotic response. Therefore they are ineffective as any source of 'arousal', defeating their purpose !...It's as if we were being given one paragraph at a time..... INEFFECTIVE !!!
Willie Cici
3/15/16, 2:47 PM
Thanks for the comments. I read the critiques to help me with future stories, editing, etc. They keep an open-minded writer grounded. The comment about someone investigating Dan's disappearance intrigues me. Let me see where that takes me.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 2:17 PM
I love that his cock hasn't grown at all and is starting to look undersized. It would be super hot if that continued...or even if his endowment began to reduce in size as he grows bigger!
Mar 20, 2015
Jack
3/15/16, 12:17 PM
great story
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:04 PM
Waiting for more.....