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A San Francisco Reader
3/15/16, 7:59 PM
I love stories where a straight-laced lad is 'transformed' into a 'sexy/dirty-minded' SKINHEAD punk ! ...but these 'chapters' are so fucking short !!! As another reader has mentioned, these 'episodes' are much too short to cause any erotic response. Therefore they are ineffective as any source of 'arousal', defeating their purpose !...It's as if we were being given one paragraph at a time..... INEFFECTIVE !!!
Willie Cici
3/15/16, 2:47 PM
Thanks for the comments. I read the critiques to help me with future stories, editing, etc. They keep an open-minded writer grounded. The comment about someone investigating Dan's disappearance intrigues me. Let me see where that takes me.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 2:17 PM
I love that his cock hasn't grown at all and is starting to look undersized. It would be super hot if that continued...or even if his endowment began to reduce in size as he grows bigger!
Mar 20, 2015
Jack
3/15/16, 12:17 PM
great story
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:04 PM
Waiting for more.....
BankStreet
3/15/16, 12:01 PM
The auhtor needs to remember the primary purpose of these stories. Such short "episodes," while promising much, do not -- by themselves -- afford sufficient time or narrative progress for arousal.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 11:59 AM
dicks hard wand more...
Anonymous
3/15/16, 10:54 AM
The writing seems to be good, but both chapters are far too short.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 10:49 AM
really intrested in how this is developing. please continue!
Anonymous
3/15/16, 10:36 AM
damn, that's so hot! please keep it up!