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Anonymous
3/15/16, 3:27 AM
This is one of your best stories. Great Job and please continue!
Anonymous
3/15/16, 3:26 AM
This is one of my your best stories. Great Job!
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:56 AM
The whole process of mind control is nice and hot as the first chapter. I can't wait to see where this story ends. What did Xavier become in the end and the relationship with the protagonist.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:53 AM
Really hot, yummy.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:28 AM
Agreed. The transition to the party was a bit abrupt. Would love to have seen a little more of Robbie's thought process after the j/o scene. I imagine him being in denial about how completely he now lusts after his former friend still but having accepted his inferior new role he'd be cringingly obsequious and idolizing to Adam, maybe volunteering to do his laundry and sniffing his used jocks, falling into the same kind of trance he was in when he put the panties on. Then he might come back to awareness as he finds himself giggling watching that Real Housewives marathon with Randy. He'd flee of course, but Randy would know his twinkification was nearly complete. ;)
A RE-EDUCATED FAN !
3/14/16, 10:47 PM
Here's hoping Edlam is alright: Like so, so many other fans, I come back every day to see if chapter eight has appeared...What is it, two month's since Daddy arrived home ?....Let's at least hope that when the author has the time to continue this exciting story, HE GIVES US A NICE 'EXTRA LONG' CHAPTER, to make-up for the long between chapters time span...Lot's of mental [interior] thoughts & feelings on the part of John & his [now] three sons to explain their new sexual actions....& this doesn't even account for officer 'cockforbrains', whom Edlam has promised is returning....[& while this is a gay oriented story, I for one wouldn't mind getting into the mind's & new actions of Maria, Vicky as well as the officers treatment of his wife & kids...Here's hoping that Alex slipped in a little re-education in the officers relationship's.....
Bulk
3/14/16, 10:17 PM
I feel like Tim or some policeman should investigate Doug's disappearance...
Anonymous
3/14/16, 9:33 PM
Do you have a revised time estimate Edlam? I'm mindlessly checking back each day in hope! Hope everything is going well outside of the site, appreciate all your work!
Anonymous
3/14/16, 8:52 PM
This story is quite creative and incredible. It has a Jumanji feeling, with concequences for each roll XD. The transformations and sideeffects are sexy and arousingly written, nice build up and dynamic between the guys. Would love it if each week or each two weeks for example would come a new part out, to keep the awesomeness going : ) . For possible themes for effects, happenings or transformations perhaps: toys, anthro/furry transformation, milking, cravings for certain food or for sex a craving bum for instance for getting something insert or a craving for having something in the mouth, getting bubble ass, uniforms like millitary or tuxedo or postman or sailor, pilot, firefighter, schooluniform, policeman, rockstar, cowboy, superhero with spandex and all or rockstar apearance, male kimono, male sexy waiter or bunny custome, lionscloth, speedo or leather harness- armbands-collar, dom-sub transformation perhaps, or a need to be held or kissed, getting cool tattoos, massaging, wrestling, growing balls, chest and balls worship, losing gag reflex, self lubrication from the inside, breeding, two getting unseperately, turning into a incubus, turning into a vampire ... just some things that came to mind ... maybe there is something in there to use XD
sthessexguy
3/14/16, 5:00 PM
Great Story tell us more about his new career