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Anonymous
3/15/16, 11:59 AM
dicks hard wand more...
Anonymous
3/15/16, 10:54 AM
The writing seems to be good, but both chapters are far too short.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 10:49 AM
really intrested in how this is developing. please continue!
Anonymous
3/15/16, 10:36 AM
damn, that's so hot! please keep it up!
Nov 22, 2012
Anonymous
3/15/16, 5:25 AM
Amazing. Thank you.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 3:27 AM
This is one of your best stories. Great Job and please continue!
Anonymous
3/15/16, 3:26 AM
This is one of my your best stories. Great Job!
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:56 AM
The whole process of mind control is nice and hot as the first chapter. I can't wait to see where this story ends. What did Xavier become in the end and the relationship with the protagonist.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:53 AM
Really hot, yummy.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:28 AM
Agreed. The transition to the party was a bit abrupt. Would love to have seen a little more of Robbie's thought process after the j/o scene. I imagine him being in denial about how completely he now lusts after his former friend still but having accepted his inferior new role he'd be cringingly obsequious and idolizing to Adam, maybe volunteering to do his laundry and sniffing his used jocks, falling into the same kind of trance he was in when he put the panties on. Then he might come back to awareness as he finds himself giggling watching that Real Housewives marathon with Randy. He'd flee of course, but Randy would know his twinkification was nearly complete. ;)