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BankStreet
3/14/16, 3:21 PM
Definitely a teaser. Hoping for more. Ryan sseems ripe for a change.
fueledboi@gmail.com
3/14/16, 2:09 PM
Your bf is one lucky guy! PLEASE keep this story going, but I agree with most everyone else: spending your free time with him is priority #1. For my part, I like reading it as a serial rather than all at once. That way, you're less likely to get burnt out and your readers are kept begging for more. Suggestion: mess with their metabolisms.
Anonymous
3/14/16, 10:48 AM
:D looking forward to more!
Quadrato
3/14/16, 10:37 AM
Fantastic story. The chapters keep getting better! When can we read the next instalment? I'm eagerly waiting! :-)
Malskin
3/14/16, 9:46 AM
a very good start, yes the first chapter is short but i know that there will be others
Anonymous
3/14/16, 8:40 AM
Awesome story!
nhobuddy
3/14/16, 8:21 AM
Re: Next Installment-- Hopefully not another year! But serious question, would you rather I publish the chapters as they're written, or wait until I have a bunch and do them all at once, or in rapid succession? Re: Zak-- What's been surmised about him is correct, and back-story will be coming, potentially after the game is completed (haven't decided when to stick that in). However, I want the story to be "realistic"(excepting of course my McGuffin). An IQ of around 75 is very low-functioning, and if I want him to even be able to read, I need to raise it. Think of the game giving him a warning shot as to who's really in charge, but I do plan to keep him young, hung, dumb, and full of cum. Re: More contact-- Coming!
mstgay3000
3/14/16, 6:30 AM
very glad to hear you guys liked it, thanks for letting me know! I might draw up a sequel for this story, it's been on my mind this week ;)
Anonymous
3/14/16, 5:17 AM
Got me waiting impatiently for the next chapter~
Anonymous
3/14/16, 4:48 AM
Great episode! The increased muscle growth is hot, even if it doesn't happen that easily in real life. This story, like our Xavier, is progressing well!