Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/14/16, 8:52 PM
This story is quite creative and incredible. It has a Jumanji feeling, with concequences for each roll XD. The transformations and sideeffects are sexy and arousingly written, nice build up and dynamic between the guys. Would love it if each week or each two weeks for example would come a new part out, to keep the awesomeness going : ) . For possible themes for effects, happenings or transformations perhaps: toys, anthro/furry transformation, milking, cravings for certain food or for sex a craving bum for instance for getting something insert or a craving for having something in the mouth, getting bubble ass, uniforms like millitary or tuxedo or postman or sailor, pilot, firefighter, schooluniform, policeman, rockstar, cowboy, superhero with spandex and all or rockstar apearance, male kimono, male sexy waiter or bunny custome, lionscloth, speedo or leather harness- armbands-collar, dom-sub transformation perhaps, or a need to be held or kissed, getting cool tattoos, massaging, wrestling, growing balls, chest and balls worship, losing gag reflex, self lubrication from the inside, breeding, two getting unseperately, turning into a incubus, turning into a vampire ... just some things that came to mind ... maybe there is something in there to use XD
sthessexguy
3/14/16, 5:00 PM
Great Story tell us more about his new career
Anonymous
3/14/16, 4:30 PM
Very Hot! I am standing at attention already!
BankStreet
3/14/16, 3:21 PM
Definitely a teaser. Hoping for more. Ryan sseems ripe for a change.
fueledboi@gmail.com
3/14/16, 2:09 PM
Your bf is one lucky guy! PLEASE keep this story going, but I agree with most everyone else: spending your free time with him is priority #1. For my part, I like reading it as a serial rather than all at once. That way, you're less likely to get burnt out and your readers are kept begging for more. Suggestion: mess with their metabolisms.
Anonymous
3/14/16, 10:48 AM
:D looking forward to more!
Quadrato
3/14/16, 10:37 AM
Fantastic story. The chapters keep getting better! When can we read the next instalment? I'm eagerly waiting! :-)
Malskin
3/14/16, 9:46 AM
a very good start, yes the first chapter is short but i know that there will be others
Anonymous
3/14/16, 8:40 AM
Awesome story!
nhobuddy
3/14/16, 8:21 AM
Re: Next Installment-- Hopefully not another year! But serious question, would you rather I publish the chapters as they're written, or wait until I have a bunch and do them all at once, or in rapid succession? Re: Zak-- What's been surmised about him is correct, and back-story will be coming, potentially after the game is completed (haven't decided when to stick that in). However, I want the story to be "realistic"(excepting of course my McGuffin). An IQ of around 75 is very low-functioning, and if I want him to even be able to read, I need to raise it. Think of the game giving him a warning shot as to who's really in charge, but I do plan to keep him young, hung, dumb, and full of cum. Re: More contact-- Coming!