Recent Comments

nhobuddy
3/14/16, 8:21 AM
Re: Next Installment-- Hopefully not another year! But serious question, would you rather I publish the chapters as they're written, or wait until I have a bunch and do them all at once, or in rapid succession? Re: Zak-- What's been surmised about him is correct, and back-story will be coming, potentially after the game is completed (haven't decided when to stick that in). However, I want the story to be "realistic"(excepting of course my McGuffin). An IQ of around 75 is very low-functioning, and if I want him to even be able to read, I need to raise it. Think of the game giving him a warning shot as to who's really in charge, but I do plan to keep him young, hung, dumb, and full of cum. Re: More contact-- Coming!
mstgay3000
3/14/16, 6:30 AM
very glad to hear you guys liked it, thanks for letting me know! I might draw up a sequel for this story, it's been on my mind this week ;)
Anonymous
3/14/16, 5:17 AM
Got me waiting impatiently for the next chapter~
Anonymous
3/14/16, 4:48 AM
Great episode! The increased muscle growth is hot, even if it doesn't happen that easily in real life. This story, like our Xavier, is progressing well!
Anonymous
3/14/16, 3:24 AM
Getting hard just reading this chapter.
Chrissy
3/14/16, 2:12 AM
I love this one so much, probably because I identify with Julian so much. Would love another story about the gang!
Anonymous
3/14/16, 1:54 AM
Good start, but way too short. Think of 2,000 words as a minimum
Guy
3/13/16, 11:18 PM
Just checked out your tumblr and loved that too haha, keep up the good work!!
Anonymous
3/13/16, 8:13 PM
I loved this a lot. I'm a big fan of foot stuff and braindead hypnosis. More like this please, but maybe with even more about the brainwashing/hypnotizing aspect and how it's working on the guys! Would love to BBall players and guys of different ethnicities (Latino, Black, Asian).
Anonymous
3/13/16, 7:56 PM
If you used MSWord, there is a review function for spelling and grammar/usage. The key to writing is not the original drafting. It's the editing -- constant, numerous, continuous. If you haven't read your own story a dozen times, you're doing yourself a disservice. The story line is hot. Don't let usage and grammar get in the way.