Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/12/16, 5:42 PM
I second wanting to see another round. Or what happens when they go out into the world
Anonymous
3/12/16, 11:47 AM
Hang on - did he leave Sebastian's place still naked? There's no mention of him getting dressed again! Kinky...
Anonymous
3/12/16, 11:44 AM
Was kind of disappointed that Zak got some intelligence back. More IQ loss if you can please!
Anonymous
3/12/16, 8:02 AM
Break up with your bf and quit your job. This story is too good for us to have to wait for a year for the next chapter
Anonymous
3/12/16, 7:01 AM
Yes, please. More whenever you can find the time. Ideas? Bubble butt, feet, sensitivity/ticklishness...
cutlerfan
3/12/16, 7:01 AM
Please do continued but enjoy your time in real life. The story can sit until you have the time, energy, and freedom to continue it! Loving it so far!
Anonymous
3/12/16, 3:04 AM
Yes love the direction, I agree with an above post, maybe get some help editing with someone proficient in English just to clean it up and maybe reword a few points. The story really kept me interested, keep going, the more you write and get revised, the better you will become
A San Francisco Reader
3/12/16, 12:16 AM
I have loved this story from the start, but I have to admit I was a little underwhelmed by this chapter. After waiting so long, I think chapter eight could have been a little longer with more 'interior-mind-changes' on the part of both Adam & Robbie...I would have enjoyed Adam becoming much more the stereotype of the overly well hung/macho 'alpha' male: strutting & showing-off his stuff, Bullying those he feels are 'inferior' to him, such as Robbie...It's only a short span from calling his roommate 'boy' to 'bitch' & having a good time putting down Robbie's total lack of endowment, while flouting his massive dick. The best scene was the J.O. segment.....Also I hope in the final chapter there will be some cock sucking by Robbie, before he get's the fucking of 'his' life by Adam. Hope they'll be a few more day's covered so we can see how these bros change in their wardrobes, the way they act in front of other college & dorm people & well as each other....I don't think they've still completed their total transformations into the stereotypical types we've been waiting for.....
Anonymous
3/11/16, 8:14 PM
Take your time,but keep it coming. seeing this made my day.
Anonymous
3/11/16, 7:31 PM
This story is amazing. Wish we'd see another round with new friends.