Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/11/16, 3:09 PM
Perfect Story. Really hope to see more!
Anonymous
3/11/16, 1:43 PM
So good. Adam sounds like a dream.
Anonymous
3/11/16, 12:20 PM
Thank you guys so much for the support !!
Anonymous
3/11/16, 11:41 AM
To be continued? Of course! That was another hot chapter. I love how they were all changed. Take your time tho. Real life, especially real life bfs, matter :)
Anonymous
3/11/16, 6:49 AM
I love the changes Very Hot and Sexy!!
xORRiNx
3/11/16, 6:47 AM
Thanks. Yea, I actually plan on having them regress back into the "fighting the curse" stage in the final chapter. I wish I would have added a little more resistance at the end just now but it'll def be there again!
Anonymous
3/11/16, 6:41 AM
Perfect! I like how you've described the change on their minds and their confusion. I love what you've done with Robbie, the part of him in panties was equally debasing and hot. I also like how Adam is now a parody of manhood, I thought you were going to make him a less extreme change, but I really like what you're doing. I'm sure that the conclusion will be awesome. But don't make them entirely forget how they used to be. Otherwise they won't see their change as a revenge for being homophobes, is better if from time to time, they can remember how they were before, and how absurdly cartoonish are now.
xORRiNx
3/11/16, 4:57 AM
It needs to be approved by the site moderator... they aren't online currently!
A CONCERNED READER
3/11/16, 4:41 AM
THIS IS ONE OF THE MORE POPULAR RECENT STORIES : IF THE NEW CHAPTER 7 HAS BEEN SUBMITTED, HOW COME IT STILL HASN'T BEEN PUBLISHED?
Anonymous
3/11/16, 4:36 AM
Interesting story, but still needs some 'copy' re-writing work, Still a few incorrect words ,[ my guess is that English is the authors second language]...A good first effort, just correct it & re-submit,,,,Good luck !