Recent Comments

xORRiNx
3/11/16, 6:47 AM
Thanks. Yea, I actually plan on having them regress back into the "fighting the curse" stage in the final chapter. I wish I would have added a little more resistance at the end just now but it'll def be there again!
Anonymous
3/11/16, 6:41 AM
Perfect! I like how you've described the change on their minds and their confusion. I love what you've done with Robbie, the part of him in panties was equally debasing and hot. I also like how Adam is now a parody of manhood, I thought you were going to make him a less extreme change, but I really like what you're doing. I'm sure that the conclusion will be awesome. But don't make them entirely forget how they used to be. Otherwise they won't see their change as a revenge for being homophobes, is better if from time to time, they can remember how they were before, and how absurdly cartoonish are now.
xORRiNx
3/11/16, 4:57 AM
It needs to be approved by the site moderator... they aren't online currently!
A CONCERNED READER
3/11/16, 4:41 AM
THIS IS ONE OF THE MORE POPULAR RECENT STORIES : IF THE NEW CHAPTER 7 HAS BEEN SUBMITTED, HOW COME IT STILL HASN'T BEEN PUBLISHED?
Anonymous
3/11/16, 4:36 AM
Interesting story, but still needs some 'copy' re-writing work, Still a few incorrect words ,[ my guess is that English is the authors second language]...A good first effort, just correct it & re-submit,,,,Good luck !
mysterious
3/11/16, 3:47 AM
sexy and a wonderful turn on about the curse. next chapter soon please.
Anonymous
3/11/16, 3:39 AM
For me, I do like some somnophilia with feet included, thank you!
slave 499508824
3/11/16, 3:26 AM
Great story just hope there is more to it, can't wait for James to come looking for Brent to plow his boy pussy.
xORRiNx
3/11/16, 2:49 AM
It was submitted!
Anonymous
3/11/16, 2:39 AM
You have us all on your toes!