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Anonymous
3/5/16, 9:41 PM
Would actually be pretty neat for the mental shifting to have Adam get really protective of Robbie. Like, overhears someone call Robbie a faggot/sissy or whatever, so he punches them-- which makes them both all confused and embarrassed, Adam for feeling so strongly to retaliate like that, and Robbie for how head-over-heels he feels for having a kknight in shining armor for that kind of thing.
Anonymous
3/5/16, 8:09 PM
Where oh where is chapter eight ??? I'v read the entire story at least three or four times, & chapter seven a few more.....Suddenly, it just has stopped [is it a month ???]. Here's hoping the author is o.k. & decides to continue someday. This was [is], without doubt, my favorite story of 2015 & I had hoped it would continue through man, many chapters, as after Alex had finished with the family, he could go on & re-educate the Police, his other brothers, anyone else the author wanted....but suddenly 'nothing' !!!!
Anonymous
3/5/16, 7:16 PM
Good introduction !! You're a skilled writer. Wish to see the effect of him and his change.
Anonymous
3/5/16, 6:00 PM
As waiting is waiting... can you please include the cops again in the next chapter? Only dad alone doesn't seem that attractive lol
cutlerfan
3/5/16, 5:13 PM
Loving it! More please. I would love him to become colossal!
Anonymous
3/5/16, 8:14 AM
Gay To homophobic sk8ter? Great idea!! At last a story that goes in the reverse direction (I am bisexual)
xORRiNx
3/5/16, 4:41 AM
I'm looking to write a bunch tonight (Friday night) but I work three 12 hour shifts Sat-Mon so writing time will be limited! Don't worry! I'll post another chapter of Top & Bottom BEFORE I write chapter 2 of Wetback Latino. :)
Anonymous
3/5/16, 4:19 AM
Nah man i hope he makes the prep to redneck story about the guy becoming really fat and slobby
Axel
3/5/16, 3:41 AM
Relax guys hes got a life to he has to live before sitting down and writing. Im sure if he had free time he would finish up the chapters we have to be patient. Were all excited to see whats next with how there dad is going to turn out. Im curious if Alex is going to go back and humiliate JJ. I could see Alex change him back letting him keep his memories and know that he bullied the brother he was so quick to defend.
Anonymous
3/5/16, 3:01 AM
love the racism!