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Jack787
3/6/16, 4:08 AM
Good start -keep it up
Anonymous
3/5/16, 11:46 PM
Awesome! Just what I like - a future muscle man who has NO CHOICE but to GROW! YES!!!!
Anonymous
3/5/16, 9:41 PM
Would actually be pretty neat for the mental shifting to have Adam get really protective of Robbie. Like, overhears someone call Robbie a faggot/sissy or whatever, so he punches them-- which makes them both all confused and embarrassed, Adam for feeling so strongly to retaliate like that, and Robbie for how head-over-heels he feels for having a kknight in shining armor for that kind of thing.
Anonymous
3/5/16, 8:09 PM
Where oh where is chapter eight ??? I'v read the entire story at least three or four times, & chapter seven a few more.....Suddenly, it just has stopped [is it a month ???]. Here's hoping the author is o.k. & decides to continue someday. This was [is], without doubt, my favorite story of 2015 & I had hoped it would continue through man, many chapters, as after Alex had finished with the family, he could go on & re-educate the Police, his other brothers, anyone else the author wanted....but suddenly 'nothing' !!!!
Anonymous
3/5/16, 7:16 PM
Good introduction !! You're a skilled writer. Wish to see the effect of him and his change.
Anonymous
3/5/16, 6:00 PM
As waiting is waiting... can you please include the cops again in the next chapter? Only dad alone doesn't seem that attractive lol
cutlerfan
3/5/16, 5:13 PM
Loving it! More please. I would love him to become colossal!
Anonymous
3/5/16, 8:14 AM
Gay To homophobic sk8ter? Great idea!! At last a story that goes in the reverse direction (I am bisexual)
xORRiNx
3/5/16, 4:41 AM
I'm looking to write a bunch tonight (Friday night) but I work three 12 hour shifts Sat-Mon so writing time will be limited! Don't worry! I'll post another chapter of Top & Bottom BEFORE I write chapter 2 of Wetback Latino. :)
Anonymous
3/5/16, 4:19 AM
Nah man i hope he makes the prep to redneck story about the guy becoming really fat and slobby