Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/1/16, 2:08 AM
Ediam, okay for the possible delay lol ... but since I am too curious ... can you just please reveal how many officers like cockforbrains you decide for Alex to play with at the end of the story? I am so into cops...
YesHope
3/1/16, 1:38 AM
I think we always have hope!!!!
EdIam
3/1/16, 1:38 AM
You guys are killer, lol. I'm crazy happy you all care about my story SO much. I really am trying to find time to keep writing. When I started this story, I was on Christmas break with no responsibilities...those responsibilities have pretty much quadrupled since then but I still very much am trying to spend time writing my story. It's my stress relief. But, well, I might not meet my deadline of tonight. I want to ensure you get a high quality next chapter so, as much as it might piss some of you off, I'm going to wait until I'm comfortable with my story before publishing it. I'll keep working on it (even tonight) because I like these characters, you guys, and getting some of this UNBELIEVABLE nursing school stress out. Thanks for your patience!!
Yachirobi
3/1/16, 1:29 AM
How is this perplexing?
Anonymous
2/29/16, 8:57 PM
Definitely hot, but would've loved to see the actual sex described in the story - feels a bit like you pulled the punch by fading to black at the payoff point.
NoHope
2/29/16, 7:44 PM
I think there's no hope for today 29 Feb... :(
Anonymous
2/29/16, 4:18 PM
Story is hot. Really hot. Control is intoxicating. As for the art of writing, you will learn is that composing the story is easy. Editing the story is painstaking. It involves reading, rereading, using word processing tools, and then more reading. That process also has an inspiring effect.
Bryce
2/29/16, 10:48 AM
so unfair.. it's already 1/3 here in New Zealand.. how long do I have to wait... :Q
Calculated
2/29/16, 4:50 AM
Thanks for the feedback guys! I'm working on Part 2 and as I work on it, I'm keeping in mind all the feedback that the story has received. Special mention would be: "To be more clear, I meant something like Ethan calling in to check in on James. Hypnotist forces James to tell Ethan everything is okay under trance while hypnotist is jerking James off with Ethan totally unaware on the other line. Would be hot." I'd agree that is extremely hot and I'm looking to incorporating that into the next part. Stay tuned it should come sometime this week (depends on how much free time I get)
Anonymous
2/29/16, 1:39 AM
excellent story.,..be interesting to see how it effects his bf