Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/27/16, 7:12 PM
I'm not gonna lie... the ending is a little disappointing. I was hoping more for a Dave and Mike situation. Did not feel the need to add Chris into the mix. Overall enjoyable story, but it sort of lost its way from the previous two parts... still a good story over all though :)
Anonymous
2/27/16, 6:49 PM
Kinda lost the app aspect of the story in this part, but I think I will come back to it often. It was a hot story even with my little critique.
Anonymous
2/27/16, 6:14 PM
finally! The stantons family and these two new slaves! together! Though it would be better if all the other slaves showed up... but I have already exploded! Great job! tomozco! You are my oasis in this desert! Excellent!
Trylithin
2/27/16, 5:55 PM
I'm more of a fan of men getting older (and bigger), but I have to admit that reading about a dominant guy getting twinkified is a little bit of a guilty pleasure of mine. Great work - looking forward to reading more from you!
Anonymous
2/27/16, 4:52 PM
Great story !! Wish to see a football version : )
Anonymous
2/27/16, 3:50 PM
Love the series. Please keep up the good work. Maybe you could have Omar wear his dress socks for several days to give his son a special treat.
Hypnotic Subjugation
2/27/16, 1:54 PM
I'd really like to see more of this! Great stuff!
Anonymous
2/27/16, 5:49 AM
Physical changes weren't really my jam, but the mentality shifts were great, and your writing is even better. I particularly liked the sweet ending, so kudos.
dimwittedbrah
2/27/16, 3:47 AM
Fucking awesome man! Would love to see more incorporating this theme - men assuming the role of young, studly sport stereotypes with low IQ. Keep it up!
Anonymous
2/27/16, 3:09 AM
This is turning out to be an increasingly awesome story. :D