Recent Comments

MuscleAce
2/25/16, 9:21 PM
Absolutely loved it! I think you jumped way over that writer's block! Hope to see more~
Feb 25, 2016
Anonymous
2/25/16, 9:21 PM
What a great way to tell story Any interest in a second chapter Wish we could find out how would came to be What a great world lol
Feb 25, 2016
Anonymous
2/25/16, 8:43 PM
This should be continued, I loved it
Feb 25, 2016
Anonymous
2/25/16, 7:54 PM
Nice, I like the indirect way of story-telling. I wonder how it is for a boy to grow up in a world like this.
Anonymous
2/25/16, 6:28 PM
Wow! Totally hot! I love the story!
Feb 25, 2016
Anonymous
2/25/16, 6:06 PM
Loved it
Anonymous
2/25/16, 6:06 PM
love it!
LotusConjurer
2/25/16, 3:47 PM
Amazing story!
Buffy67
2/25/16, 2:10 PM
Excellent for first time writing
RicanCub
2/25/16, 1:52 PM
I am loving this story a lot. please keep it coming!