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Anonymous
8/14/24, 8:36 AM
Eager to see where this goes
8/14/24, 8:32 AM
This isna brillant piece of work ! Thank YOU so much ! Leather, cigar and submission have always been huge fetishes of mine and I couldn't dreamt a better story ! This is absolutely perfect and the feelings, thoughts of the slave are so well-expressed. Thank YOU so much again
8/14/24, 3:00 AM
Great start. I hope that theres more side effect to the love bomb to Harry. Hope he get more attracted and submissive to Eli. And obv, Ben should also be love bombed.

8/14/24, 6:11 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you! I definitely want to play around with different versions of it for Harry specifically. And of course Ben will get a love bomb too, thinking of doing that for the next part of this story. Thanks for reading! <3
8/14/24, 5:21 AM
All right! Got us some pipe action, now!
Anonymous
7/18/24, 7:24 PM
Fantastic story; one of the best I've read here! Funny and hot and romantic, all brought together by your delightful style. Excellent job!

8/14/24, 4:54 AM
@Anonymous Thank you very much!
7/16/24, 1:05 AM
Wow. That was one of the finest erotic stories I've ever read. I really like intelligence with my erotic braintickling. Not to mention skillful writing and interesting thought-out characters. All the nice things said above - me, too. But in my case, I could humbly ask for some thinning out of the super-technical computer nerdfood section. It got so complicated that I just started to feel lost and afraid I'd have to give up and pass on the rest of the story. :-( I had to just...skim, hoping that the stuff for us non-programmers would poke through again, which it happily did. Perhaps keep all the What was done and Why but a lot less of the granular How? Anyway, something to consider for a possible next edit? Bravo!

8/14/24, 4:54 AM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Noted! On re-reading I do understand how it can be overwhelming jargon-wise. I'm a bit of a hard sci-fi geek and I think I approached it with just a touch too much of assumed knowledge. Part of the reason I had some cryptic mentions of YouTube videos (all of which are real!) was to try give some background info in case that area was entirely unfamiliar, but if I ever revisit this story this is definitely a critique I'll be following up on. Thank you for the kind words and for your perspective!
7/4/24, 5:07 PM
Very hot - and sweet - reality change story. I usually get off on the "meaner" side of the genre, but I really loved it : ) Thanks, LLOYD

8/14/24, 4:49 AM
@[Lloyd311](/user/show/13481) Thanks so much! I'm very glad that you got into this story despite the softer tone I ended up going for. Means a lot c:
8/14/24, 3:30 AM
Didn’t expect the story to go here, but glad that it did!
8/14/24, 3:24 AM
Oh wow, this chapter took so many twist and turns. The mystery about his dad's file/identity, being blissed by Creed, and now his family/group working together to out bliss the Colonel's bliss. Looking forward for the update.
Anonymous
8/14/24, 2:59 AM
I'm loving it a lot. Theirs a lot of routes you can go. Such as fucking differs sports teams, coaches, campus security, frat, foreign exchange students or teachers. I like Eli at the top. It would be cool if the potion would cause people to start actually liking the person they make love with.