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A SAN FRANCISCO READER & FAN
2/21/16, 4:27 AM
....COME ON EDLAM : THROW THE BOOK AT JOHN, [JUST THE WAY ALEX WOULD !]...SOME READERS WILL OBJECT, BUT HE SHOULD BE RE-EDUCATED INTO THE MOST FILTHY, AWFUL ASS-HOLE IN RECENT GAY FICTION. AFTER ALL IT'S OBVIOUS FROM THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER THAT JOHN IS ALEX'S MOST HATED HENDERSON FAMILY MEMBER, SO ONE WOULD THINK HE'D BE TURNED INTO A MORE MATURE 'EVIL-DADDY' VERSION OF ALEX HIMSELF, WITH PERHAPS A LITTLE OF FRED'S WORST FEATURES THROWN IN FOR GOOD MEASURE. HOPE IN CHAPTER EIGHT WE GET TO HEAR A FEW OF ALEX'S RE-EDUCATION SUGGESTION'S, [SINCE THEY WEREN'T SPELLED-OUT IN THIS CHAPTER] ALSO WONDER IF JJ ADDED A FEW INTERESTING SUGGESTION'S [TO IMPRESS ALEX ]....HOPE WE GET MORE DELVING INTO JOHN'S MIND TO EXPLAIN HIS NEW BEHAVIOR....ALSO CURIOUS HOW EDLAM WILL TREAT MARIA, AS WELL....
Slave of Skrill
2/20/16, 8:21 PM
Everyone commenting on grammar... It does not matter. We will all bow to Master Kronos. I worship my alien master and give him my body and mind readily.
A San Francisco Reader
2/20/16, 7:00 PM
I hope Edlam really turns John around 100 %, Where he had unconditional love & pride in his son's there should be nothing but hate and indifference. All the love should go to his 'only true son', Alex. Where he loved his wife, he should now find her [& all women] disgusting. Vickie would now be a laughable, worthless bitch. He should have no moral's, whatsoever. If he was formally 'strong willed', he's now 'weak willed'..Hates all religion, loves drinking, can hardly say any thing without throwing in a dirty word...just, the world's worst example of a 'Dad' !!!!
Anonymous
2/20/16, 10:09 AM
well written, and leaving me wanting more! thank you very much!
Anonymous
2/20/16, 8:28 AM
Love the way this story is progressing!
Anonymous
2/20/16, 6:46 AM
I JUST REALIZED THAT ALEX HAS THREE BROTHERS AT HOME, [RIGHT NEXT DOOR], AT LEAST ONE OF WHICH,[HIS OLDER BRO. HAS BEATEN HIM UP IN THE PAST]...I BET ALEX WOULD LIKE TO GET EVEN WITH THAT BRO, MAKING HIM A FAGGOT WEAKLING, AND WHAT ABOUT HIS TWO YOUNGER ONE'S ?......PERHAPS IN SOME FUTURE CHAPTER THEY'LL COME OVER OR ALEX WILL GO OVER THERE TO RE-EDUCATE THEM ????
Apr 11, 2008
Redbird
2/20/16, 6:00 AM
Very hot. Love I use of the three fold rule. Hope you make a sequel but if this story is a stand alone that is ok too.
Tom EGH Webmaster
2/20/16, 4:31 AM
This story is so well written, it's an instant favorite of mine. I really hope you'll continue with John discussing his problem with other guys in a group setting.
Anonymous
2/20/16, 12:46 AM
Maybe some piercings, tattoos and edgy hairstyles?
Anonymous
2/20/16, 12:30 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter