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Slave of Skrill
2/20/16, 8:21 PM
Everyone commenting on grammar... It does not matter. We will all bow to Master Kronos. I worship my alien master and give him my body and mind readily.
A San Francisco Reader
2/20/16, 7:00 PM
I hope Edlam really turns John around 100 %, Where he had unconditional love & pride in his son's there should be nothing but hate and indifference. All the love should go to his 'only true son', Alex. Where he loved his wife, he should now find her [& all women] disgusting. Vickie would now be a laughable, worthless bitch. He should have no moral's, whatsoever. If he was formally 'strong willed', he's now 'weak willed'..Hates all religion, loves drinking, can hardly say any thing without throwing in a dirty word...just, the world's worst example of a 'Dad' !!!!
Anonymous
2/20/16, 10:09 AM
well written, and leaving me wanting more! thank you very much!
Anonymous
2/20/16, 8:28 AM
Love the way this story is progressing!
Anonymous
2/20/16, 6:46 AM
I JUST REALIZED THAT ALEX HAS THREE BROTHERS AT HOME, [RIGHT NEXT DOOR], AT LEAST ONE OF WHICH,[HIS OLDER BRO. HAS BEATEN HIM UP IN THE PAST]...I BET ALEX WOULD LIKE TO GET EVEN WITH THAT BRO, MAKING HIM A FAGGOT WEAKLING, AND WHAT ABOUT HIS TWO YOUNGER ONE'S ?......PERHAPS IN SOME FUTURE CHAPTER THEY'LL COME OVER OR ALEX WILL GO OVER THERE TO RE-EDUCATE THEM ????
Apr 11, 2008
Redbird
2/20/16, 6:00 AM
Very hot. Love I use of the three fold rule. Hope you make a sequel but if this story is a stand alone that is ok too.
Tom EGH Webmaster
2/20/16, 4:31 AM
This story is so well written, it's an instant favorite of mine. I really hope you'll continue with John discussing his problem with other guys in a group setting.
Anonymous
2/20/16, 12:46 AM
Maybe some piercings, tattoos and edgy hairstyles?
Anonymous
2/20/16, 12:30 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter
Messenger to Edlam
2/19/16, 10:17 PM
I totally agree with the reader who wrote-in regarding the father's upcoming transformation : Remembering back to Edlam's description of Frank's dirty house & especially Alex's filthy bedroom, it's a shame we can't have a flash forward to the Henderson's house in the near future : empty booze bottles & beer can's littering the floor, gay porno mag's all over, large posters of hung nude men taped to the wall's, cum rag's & used tissues lying about, etc......Perhaps, when John wakes-up that's what he expected [?] & is upset that someone's cleaned the place...Also, how about him calling Fred over from next door ? Their about the same age & NOW would have a lot in common [!]....Alex might encourage this ???...Also, I don't know if the author want's to get into 'piss' stuff, but I could see JJ & Alex, as well as 'cockforbrains' using John as the household toilet ??? As for Officer CockForBrain's, perhaps when he returns Alex will re-educate him a little more, turning him into the kind of sick/macho policeman Alex could admire, someone who completely abuses his power & authority !!!!!!