Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/21/16, 10:43 PM
Ich will noch mehr Erlebnisse unseres Nachzüglers lesen! Sehr geil geschrieben, danke!
Slow and steady
2/21/16, 7:51 PM
Wow, a unique slow and steady. Other stories would have them flying in super capes and groggling in panties. Please take it painfully slow.... Love it. How about a bit of scent. The newly formed jock develops a sweat that glossons his skin in a marble like look on his apparently med-style tan ... but the pheromones are unmistakable giving off a dominant rush of masculine musk. The jockstrap soon seems to focus in on that musk.
Jim
2/21/16, 5:05 PM
I can't wait until they start having sex but in their minds they know they are still straight but can't help it.
Anonymous
2/21/16, 5:03 PM
IS IT TIME FOR THE AUTHOR TO TRY OUT ROBBIE'S LISP ? BET THAT WILL BE A LAUGH AMONG HIS NEW FRIEND'S..A FEW FLUTTERING HANDS & A SWAYING BIG BUTT PLUS 'HER' NEW HIGH FEM. VOICE & LISP SHOULD DO THE TRICK !!! AS 'HER' BODY'S CHANGING ROBBIE MIGHT WANT GO DOWN TO THE CAMPUS STORE & BUY A FEW NEW OUTFIT'S : SOME PASTEL TIGHT TEE'S MIGHT DO THE TRICK WITH A FEW PAIR OF TIGHT THIN PANT'S WHICH REVEAL THE NEW LACK OF ANY 'PACKAGE'...OH & DON'T FORGET 'PINK' IS ROBBIES NEW FAVORITE COLOR ! ON THE OTHER HAND ADAM MAY WANT TO FIND SOME JEANS THAT PROUDLY DISPLAY HIS NEW HUGE BULGE !
A San Francisco Reader
2/21/16, 4:49 PM
This is getting really hot. Here's hoping it's now an accepted practice for Adam to walk around the dorm room with a hard-on & not think anything of it ! Also like the way the author is changing Robbie's memories, hope he does a lot more of that with Adam as well. Can't wait for Adam to decide to always wear his Jock Straps around the dorm hallways & at the gym, but perhaps he'll want to go 'freeballing' on a date [?] though the copious amount of constant pre-cum dripping out of his thick long 'soft' penis may present a problem. Glad that he skipped class's since it looks like he's going to be somewhat 'dumb-down'. Three inch's soft & five hard still seems awfully generous for Robbie though [?] A little two inch nub [at most] & a weak, thin little pencil-dick of [at the most] three inch's would be more like it..His 'pee-pee' should be so small that's it's laughable, so 'she' keeps it hidden in her new panties [forgetting it was ever any bigger !!]
Doug Kent
2/21/16, 3:44 PM
Please dont speed the curse up too much
Anonymous
2/21/16, 7:38 AM
Very hot story! Awesome, love the military rubber suits and helmet mind control!!
Anonymous
2/21/16, 4:58 AM
"FUCK, Alex. The least you could have FUCKING done was hypnotize me to get FUCKING naked before you FUCKING woke me back up. FUCK, you know I don't like FUCKING clothes in my FUCKING house, son. I FUCKING raised you better than that !"
A SAN FRANCISCO READER & FAN
2/21/16, 4:27 AM
....COME ON EDLAM : THROW THE BOOK AT JOHN, [JUST THE WAY ALEX WOULD !]...SOME READERS WILL OBJECT, BUT HE SHOULD BE RE-EDUCATED INTO THE MOST FILTHY, AWFUL ASS-HOLE IN RECENT GAY FICTION. AFTER ALL IT'S OBVIOUS FROM THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER THAT JOHN IS ALEX'S MOST HATED HENDERSON FAMILY MEMBER, SO ONE WOULD THINK HE'D BE TURNED INTO A MORE MATURE 'EVIL-DADDY' VERSION OF ALEX HIMSELF, WITH PERHAPS A LITTLE OF FRED'S WORST FEATURES THROWN IN FOR GOOD MEASURE. HOPE IN CHAPTER EIGHT WE GET TO HEAR A FEW OF ALEX'S RE-EDUCATION SUGGESTION'S, [SINCE THEY WEREN'T SPELLED-OUT IN THIS CHAPTER] ALSO WONDER IF JJ ADDED A FEW INTERESTING SUGGESTION'S [TO IMPRESS ALEX ]....HOPE WE GET MORE DELVING INTO JOHN'S MIND TO EXPLAIN HIS NEW BEHAVIOR....ALSO CURIOUS HOW EDLAM WILL TREAT MARIA, AS WELL....
Slave of Skrill
2/20/16, 8:21 PM
Everyone commenting on grammar... It does not matter. We will all bow to Master Kronos. I worship my alien master and give him my body and mind readily.