Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/19/16, 1:57 AM
PERHAPS SOMETIME IN A FUTURE CHAPTER,THE CURSE WILL BACKFIRE ON AHAD & RANDY, CAUSING AHAD & ADAM TO START 'BONDING....', AS WILL THE FEM'S RANDY & ROBBIE, THESE PAIRS OF FELLOWS MAY WELL DISCOVER THAT THEY HAVE MUCH MORE IN COMMON WITH EACH OTHER THEN THEIR CURRENT ROOMMATES ???....[A CONCLUDING FUTURE CHAPTER ?]
Again auto me subtlety
2/19/16, 1:57 AM
I enjoy the subtle changes. Please don't jack Adam up, turn him into superhero, steal muscles from twenty guys. Slow and steady is cool. Twink, lisp, whatever.... They are on day four only. We have so many fast stories. Best unique story of the year.... for taking the courage to slow it down. Thanks.
A CONCERNED READER
2/19/16, 1:24 AM
THIS IS THE THIRD TIME I'V RE-READ THE STORY, SO FAR, & IT STILL GET'S ME OFF ! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IF JOHN BECOMES THE DIRTY, COCK OBSESSED PERVERT I'M HOPING FOR. IF SO, ALL THE LOVE HE FELT FOR HIS [TRUE] SON'S WILL BE 100% GONE, [TRANSFERRED TO ALEX] LEAVING ONLY SEXUAL LUST TOWARD J.J. & DISGUST & LOATHING FOR JAKE...ALSO ALL THAT LOVE FOR MARIA SHOULD TURN TO 'HATRED' FOR HER & PROBABLY ALL WOMEN...WHO KNOWS WHAT ALEX MIGHT HAVE IN STORE FOR THE WOMEN IN THE BASEMENT ?
xORRiNx
2/19/16, 1:10 AM
Yikes! Thanks for the heads up on the lisp!
Anonymous
2/19/16, 12:41 AM
How can I meet Master Wormwood???
Anonymous
2/19/16, 12:08 AM
This carries over from past chapters, but you REALLY need to learn how a lisp works. It affects the letter S. Not T, not K, 'jutht' the letter S. If you want to put the lisp in as a stereotype, that's fine, but if your effeminate twink is saying things like "othhay," he's got other speech problems that aren't a lisp. Now that I've said that, I like the transformation and would like to see it continue. Just fix the lisp thing. :P
xORRiNx
2/18/16, 11:07 PM
The story will continue to be told slowly. The next chapter will not be what you guys are describing below. I'm sorry :(. Eventually yes though. :)
Anonymous
2/18/16, 10:55 PM
What better time than his 'date' with Sarah, for Robbie to discover that he suddenly 'can't get it up' with a girl?? Perhaps after she point's out how 'little' his [bottom-boy] 'nub' is...This would kill two bird's with one stone, allowing Robbie to realize how very small his penis has become: ' now I remember, the boy's & girls have always laughed at my tiny thing! It's just soo very small, & always has been,!'....This would also explain his 'new' intense interest in his 'best friend' Adam's big manly 9 or 10 incher, which Adam thinks nothing about walking around their dorm room 'showing it off', [actually knowing full well that Robbie, the 'inferior' can't take his eye's off it !]..........Just another thought: The fellow's who cast the curse, can't really know it's working until Adam & Robbie start showing obvious signs in apperance & behavior around the college & dorm. The author has just hinted at it, but by now shouldn't Robbie's voice be getting higher & more fem, with the beginning of a lisp as well as fluttering hands & swishing [enlarged] behind ?? And as for Adam, there are just so many ways to be stereotypicaly hyper dominant & pure alpha-macho, not only toward Robbie, but all other men....[Although another story in this collection is dealing with a related theme, it would be very erotic if Adam became a complete Bully in his relationship toward Robbie]...Robbie is still far to 'butch' & bro-like for someone who is cursed to become a flaming sissy!!!!
Anonymous
2/18/16, 10:36 PM
Heheh - seems like you took commenters' impatience and wrote it into the story. I like this chapter the best as things begin to move. :)
Anonymous
2/18/16, 10:24 PM
Great! I've got my eyes open ...