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A CONCERNED READER
2/19/16, 1:24 AM
THIS IS THE THIRD TIME I'V RE-READ THE STORY, SO FAR, & IT STILL GET'S ME OFF ! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IF JOHN BECOMES THE DIRTY, COCK OBSESSED PERVERT I'M HOPING FOR. IF SO, ALL THE LOVE HE FELT FOR HIS [TRUE] SON'S WILL BE 100% GONE, [TRANSFERRED TO ALEX] LEAVING ONLY SEXUAL LUST TOWARD J.J. & DISGUST & LOATHING FOR JAKE...ALSO ALL THAT LOVE FOR MARIA SHOULD TURN TO 'HATRED' FOR HER & PROBABLY ALL WOMEN...WHO KNOWS WHAT ALEX MIGHT HAVE IN STORE FOR THE WOMEN IN THE BASEMENT ?
xORRiNx
2/19/16, 1:10 AM
Yikes! Thanks for the heads up on the lisp!
Anonymous
2/19/16, 12:41 AM
How can I meet Master Wormwood???
Anonymous
2/19/16, 12:08 AM
This carries over from past chapters, but you REALLY need to learn how a lisp works. It affects the letter S. Not T, not K, 'jutht' the letter S. If you want to put the lisp in as a stereotype, that's fine, but if your effeminate twink is saying things like "othhay," he's got other speech problems that aren't a lisp. Now that I've said that, I like the transformation and would like to see it continue. Just fix the lisp thing. :P
xORRiNx
2/18/16, 11:07 PM
The story will continue to be told slowly. The next chapter will not be what you guys are describing below. I'm sorry :(. Eventually yes though. :)
Anonymous
2/18/16, 10:55 PM
What better time than his 'date' with Sarah, for Robbie to discover that he suddenly 'can't get it up' with a girl?? Perhaps after she point's out how 'little' his [bottom-boy] 'nub' is...This would kill two bird's with one stone, allowing Robbie to realize how very small his penis has become: ' now I remember, the boy's & girls have always laughed at my tiny thing! It's just soo very small, & always has been,!'....This would also explain his 'new' intense interest in his 'best friend' Adam's big manly 9 or 10 incher, which Adam thinks nothing about walking around their dorm room 'showing it off', [actually knowing full well that Robbie, the 'inferior' can't take his eye's off it !]..........Just another thought: The fellow's who cast the curse, can't really know it's working until Adam & Robbie start showing obvious signs in apperance & behavior around the college & dorm. The author has just hinted at it, but by now shouldn't Robbie's voice be getting higher & more fem, with the beginning of a lisp as well as fluttering hands & swishing [enlarged] behind ?? And as for Adam, there are just so many ways to be stereotypicaly hyper dominant & pure alpha-macho, not only toward Robbie, but all other men....[Although another story in this collection is dealing with a related theme, it would be very erotic if Adam became a complete Bully in his relationship toward Robbie]...Robbie is still far to 'butch' & bro-like for someone who is cursed to become a flaming sissy!!!!
Anonymous
2/18/16, 10:36 PM
Heheh - seems like you took commenters' impatience and wrote it into the story. I like this chapter the best as things begin to move. :)
Anonymous
2/18/16, 10:24 PM
Great! I've got my eyes open ...
Anonymous
2/18/16, 7:38 PM
I Don't mind the slow progression i know it will happen :) there are so many faast stories on here!!!!!
Anonymous
2/18/16, 7:20 PM
My god....eleven more day's to wait !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!