Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/16/16, 5:24 AM
So hot!
Anonymous
2/16/16, 4:51 AM
Finally! The Popa joins! Excellent installment. Your descriptions of the SEX are So incredible! They make me cum every time! Thanks for the Hot stories . More of this family would always be appreciated as they settle in to their life as Whores!
Anonymous
2/16/16, 3:47 AM
Look I'm all about building the characters. But are you going to make this 30 chapters long? I think most will just lose interest in the story if you pace it too slow.
Subtlety
2/16/16, 1:26 AM
Love subtle changes. Let it ride. Wonderful .... especially when they start to fight the curse. Hum, maybe they find a physical way to fight the force in later stages.
Anonymous
2/15/16, 11:19 PM
Step dad would make a nice addition to the harem. Oh please do.
Anonymous
2/15/16, 11:02 PM
Hooray for ways to speed up the curse!
xORRiNx
2/15/16, 9:55 PM
A San Francisco Reader: I'll admit the lack of steamy scenes in this chapter but I can assure you I have planned extended sexual scenes in all future chapters. :)
A San Francisco Reader
2/15/16, 9:48 PM
Even if I agree that this is 'different' than the usual 'poof, your a fag' story...Don't we really read these chapters to 'get off' ? Being subtle is all well & good and I see nothing wrong with going slowww....but I wish the author would at least 'throw us a bone' & give us a little something exciting enough to jack off about in each chapter.....
xORRiNx
2/15/16, 9:42 PM
Hey guys, just checking in! I hear your feedback about speed... This will continue to be a subtle speed but the next chapter will introduce a method for Ahad and Randy to jump-start certain physical changes (trust me you'll like it)... the curse will still take about a month give or take. Also, something to think about: They can't be sexual with each other if they are straight best buds. For a true dom/sub relationship their friendship will have to be deconstructed first ;) ;)
avalon
2/15/16, 8:36 PM
keep it slowww! thats the point of this story!!! Slow and subtle! There are a million other 'poof, you're a puff' stories on this site, keeping this one slow is one of the things that sets it apart!!!