Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/15/16, 11:19 PM
Step dad would make a nice addition to the harem. Oh please do.
Anonymous
2/15/16, 11:02 PM
Hooray for ways to speed up the curse!
xORRiNx
2/15/16, 9:55 PM
A San Francisco Reader: I'll admit the lack of steamy scenes in this chapter but I can assure you I have planned extended sexual scenes in all future chapters. :)
A San Francisco Reader
2/15/16, 9:48 PM
Even if I agree that this is 'different' than the usual 'poof, your a fag' story...Don't we really read these chapters to 'get off' ? Being subtle is all well & good and I see nothing wrong with going slowww....but I wish the author would at least 'throw us a bone' & give us a little something exciting enough to jack off about in each chapter.....
xORRiNx
2/15/16, 9:42 PM
Hey guys, just checking in! I hear your feedback about speed... This will continue to be a subtle speed but the next chapter will introduce a method for Ahad and Randy to jump-start certain physical changes (trust me you'll like it)... the curse will still take about a month give or take. Also, something to think about: They can't be sexual with each other if they are straight best buds. For a true dom/sub relationship their friendship will have to be deconstructed first ;) ;)
avalon
2/15/16, 8:36 PM
keep it slowww! thats the point of this story!!! Slow and subtle! There are a million other 'poof, you're a puff' stories on this site, keeping this one slow is one of the things that sets it apart!!!
A San Francisco Reader
2/15/16, 8:03 PM
I enjoy a transformation story that takes it's time, but this is sooo very 'subtle' that you can hardly tell there's been any change at all, [except for Adams growing beard...] Hope the author gets into the bros mental changes soon & their changing relationship toward each other....Looking forward to the next few chapters...
BoonBoon
2/15/16, 6:40 PM
Good, good! I love that you're taking your time for make this story. The subtle transformation is perfect.
Anonymous
2/15/16, 6:24 PM
No don't speed it up too much!!! :) I've never read a story this slow before!
scudder
2/15/16, 6:00 PM
Quite possibly the most subtle (read slowest) transformation story ever posted on this site!