Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/18/24, 7:24 PM
Fantastic story; one of the best I've read here! Funny and hot and romantic, all brought together by your delightful style. Excellent job!

8/14/24, 4:54 AM
@Anonymous Thank you very much!
7/16/24, 1:05 AM
Wow. That was one of the finest erotic stories I've ever read. I really like intelligence with my erotic braintickling. Not to mention skillful writing and interesting thought-out characters. All the nice things said above - me, too. But in my case, I could humbly ask for some thinning out of the super-technical computer nerdfood section. It got so complicated that I just started to feel lost and afraid I'd have to give up and pass on the rest of the story. :-( I had to just...skim, hoping that the stuff for us non-programmers would poke through again, which it happily did. Perhaps keep all the What was done and Why but a lot less of the granular How? Anyway, something to consider for a possible next edit? Bravo!

8/14/24, 4:54 AM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Noted! On re-reading I do understand how it can be overwhelming jargon-wise. I'm a bit of a hard sci-fi geek and I think I approached it with just a touch too much of assumed knowledge. Part of the reason I had some cryptic mentions of YouTube videos (all of which are real!) was to try give some background info in case that area was entirely unfamiliar, but if I ever revisit this story this is definitely a critique I'll be following up on. Thank you for the kind words and for your perspective!
7/4/24, 5:07 PM
Very hot - and sweet - reality change story. I usually get off on the "meaner" side of the genre, but I really loved it : ) Thanks, LLOYD

8/14/24, 4:49 AM
@[Lloyd311](/user/show/13481) Thanks so much! I'm very glad that you got into this story despite the softer tone I ended up going for. Means a lot c:
8/14/24, 3:30 AM
Didn’t expect the story to go here, but glad that it did!
8/14/24, 3:24 AM
Oh wow, this chapter took so many twist and turns. The mystery about his dad's file/identity, being blissed by Creed, and now his family/group working together to out bliss the Colonel's bliss. Looking forward for the update.
Anonymous
8/14/24, 2:59 AM
I'm loving it a lot. Theirs a lot of routes you can go. Such as fucking differs sports teams, coaches, campus security, frat, foreign exchange students or teachers. I like Eli at the top. It would be cool if the potion would cause people to start actually liking the person they make love with.
Anonymous
8/14/24, 1:51 AM
This story is so awesome; I hope Harry develops a crush on Eli. Love the potion theme, it's note quite as popular as I'd like :D
Sep 15, 2023
BDJBoy
9/15/23, 7:00 PM
Insanely sexy :hot_face: I would love to see more and other kinds of transformations that can happen at this particular convention. The way this story borders on the line of what's actually possible was so :hot_face:

Anonymous
8/14/24, 12:02 AM
@[BDJBoy](/user/show/2983417) So do I Especially that tits enhancement machine that was referenced would be particularly hot
8/13/24, 11:25 PM
This is right up my alley and just keeps getting hotter and hotter. I get some people aren’t always in favor of bringing females into stories, but it feels like it’s set to make this story that much hotter, and who knows where EdIam takes this masterpiece. Dont forget Danny was set to meet Gina’s parents tomorrow..
8/13/24, 10:53 PM
I want what he had :D