Recent Comments

rodready
2/12/16, 7:47 PM
Man, excellent start. Reminds me of an Onix story. And yeh, the stereotypes are totally like every hot Omegle convo I have all the time. Nice details too. (Bushy pits you can't hide ... yup) Suggest you take your time, get in lots of detail on the change process - and you are definitely showing talent, so why not show off? Even a dumbass will probably stick with it cuz everybody likes a story that takes time.
xORRiNx
2/12/16, 6:50 PM
I'm reading your comments! I have an outline that I'm always tweaking! :) I should have PART 2 posted by Sunday night or Monday morning. This may end up being up to 5 parts because of the speed at this TF. :)
BoonBoon
2/12/16, 6:40 PM
Man, this is a great start!! I love your description of what Adam would be. If you allow me a suggestion, play with their clothing. Girly clothes in pastel colors and panties for a limp wristed Robbie, and some macho clothing for a rough Adam (some in the style cowboy, or leather or something by the way). Language is very important too! Maybe Robie would become whiny feeble type, while Adam would be a very vulgar macho man. I assume Robbie will become increasingly dumb, only concerned about pop music and fashion, but Adam will become dumb too?
Anonymous
2/12/16, 3:50 PM
One of the best stories on this site,the descriptions of sex are extremely hot.Maybe there's no necessary to add more victims(five hotties is enough to enjoy).I'm wondering if we could ascribe Max's actions to a mixture of revenge and the remained love towards Clint.And it's interesting to see the picture that five family members can't help but indulge themselves in the pleasure Max gave them even when they regain consciousness. All Five members becomes Max's lovers to make max up and they live together happily ever after.(Please tolerate my Language errors since English is not my first language)
Anonymous
2/12/16, 12:26 PM
Edlam its been so long...
Anonymous
2/12/16, 9:44 AM
:)
Tim
2/12/16, 8:44 AM
I hope these guy's change slowly, day by day, without ether one realizing their becoming totally & obviously 'gay'. I especially look forward to the one 'bro' becoming a real 'sissy' type faggot : lisping, mincing, nelly pantie wearing tiny 'clit' sized pee pee type. Hope the other guy turns into a dominate cigar-smoking, kick-ass crude rough 'mother-fucker' type......Every steriotype in the book would be nice [ & erotic].....
San Francisco Reader
2/12/16, 7:43 AM
GOOD START, EXCITED TO SEE HOW THINGS DEVELOP. LIKE THE FACT THAT THE AUTHOR IS TAKING HIS TIME..IT'S OFTEN SEXIER IF THING'S PROGRESS MORE SLOWLY, RATHER THEN SEX ON THE FIRST NIGHT....
Anonymous
2/12/16, 7:23 AM
This is a wonderful premise! Really excited to watch it all unfold. :)
Canadian Cowboy.
2/12/16, 6:58 AM
To you and all other people who have posted comments on my stories, stating that they enjoyed the stories, a most sincere 'thank you' for taking the time and putting forth the effort to post a public comment. If I may, I would like to draw to your attention that just below 'THE END' it says..... Paul Walton and Andrew Anderson will return in "The Coffee Shop VI". Yes, I am currently working on "The Coffee Shop VI. As soon as the story has been completed (and proof read many times) I will post the story here. I would caution you that it will be months before the story is finished. It takes a great deal of time to write the Coffee Shop stories. While you are waiting, you might consider re-reading all five stories and posting comments on chapters that you particularly enjoyed. I appreciate feedback from readers and learning what they did and did not enjoy in the stories. If you are shy about posting public comments, you can always send your comments to my email address. Regards, Canadian Cowboy.