Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/11/16, 4:35 AM
The story could be greatly enhanced with proofreading and an editor. I'm sure there are many readers of this site who can do an excellent job of proofreading. And I agree with the previous comment - the story has a charming B movie feel to it. I can already visualize the B-quality actors mechanically saying those lines. :)
Anonymous
2/11/16, 4:18 AM
Ultra hot!!! Can we have an epilogue? Clint hasn't played nearly enough in this chapter!!!
Justafan
2/11/16, 3:45 AM
It's on 10th page now... Update perhaps ? :p
Anonymous
2/11/16, 3:37 AM
Love both your stories. My favorite bit is when he tries to fight it and his nips/pecs/cock get even bigger and more sensitive.
Anonymous
2/11/16, 3:29 AM
You would think after the comments of the previous chapter, the author would addressed concerns regarding the grammar, punctuation and paragraph breaks. Because of this, it seems he really doesn't care about the story or reaction from readers. To me, that says "poor effort". As for the story itself, it actually has a charming B movie feel to it. I can't help but think of some silly 50s "B" sci-fi movie. Ridiculous, laughable and fun all in one package.
Anonymous
2/11/16, 2:13 AM
Hot! The best Willie's had in a while
Sep 12, 2011
Anonymous
2/11/16, 1:47 AM
"Just before 2:00 am, Jason pulled on baggy nylon shorts and slid his feet into a pair of tennis shoes. The cloth draped itself between his buttocks and around his semi-erect cock. It felt cool and smooth against his skin. He didn't think he would meet anyone, but he didn't want to have to explain why he was naked. If someone saw him, he was minimally covered and he could say he was getting something from his car." ahhh why is it not summer yet?? thanks for all the detail in your stories
Anonymous
2/10/16, 11:56 PM
For some people it's not attractive. Light bodyhair for me is fine, but when it's thick or coarse it can come off as gross.
Anonymous
2/10/16, 11:44 PM
This and it's previous chapter desperately need better structure, phrasing, spacing, and grammar. Otherwise it will be a difficult to read or even bear this story. Otherwise there's not much else to say as not enough of the plot is available to deem it's value or potential.