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Hypnotic Subjugation
2/11/16, 7:17 AM
This was really hot! I love the progression of the jock's reprogramming and how, at the end, they were just left on the bed with a pair of vibrators stuffed up their butts.
TimNJ
2/11/16, 7:09 AM
Spectacular. Incredibly erotic. Besides being so entertaining, I really appreciate the summary which lead off the story; it helped remind me of the previous installments
Anonymous
2/11/16, 6:43 AM
Oh, such epilogue would be great! I wonder if you'd ever reverse their top/bottom position, where the older ones are fucked by the younger? A reward for enslaving his elders :)
Anonymous
2/11/16, 5:55 AM
I love how you got the jocks hairless. Totally hot.
Hypnotic Subjugation
2/11/16, 4:50 AM
I'm thinking of doing an epilogue. Sort of a "where are they now?" type of thing.
Anonymous
2/11/16, 4:35 AM
The story could be greatly enhanced with proofreading and an editor. I'm sure there are many readers of this site who can do an excellent job of proofreading. And I agree with the previous comment - the story has a charming B movie feel to it. I can already visualize the B-quality actors mechanically saying those lines. :)
Anonymous
2/11/16, 4:18 AM
Ultra hot!!! Can we have an epilogue? Clint hasn't played nearly enough in this chapter!!!
Justafan
2/11/16, 3:45 AM
It's on 10th page now... Update perhaps ? :p
Anonymous
2/11/16, 3:37 AM
Love both your stories. My favorite bit is when he tries to fight it and his nips/pecs/cock get even bigger and more sensitive.
Anonymous
2/11/16, 3:29 AM
You would think after the comments of the previous chapter, the author would addressed concerns regarding the grammar, punctuation and paragraph breaks. Because of this, it seems he really doesn't care about the story or reaction from readers. To me, that says "poor effort". As for the story itself, it actually has a charming B movie feel to it. I can't help but think of some silly 50s "B" sci-fi movie. Ridiculous, laughable and fun all in one package.