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8/14/24, 11:34 AM
Interesting to find out what the 'promoter' will produce and how Master will deal with his new potential pairing!
8/13/24, 8:52 PM
Boy, Jay--who somehow gets and accepts a scholarship to BYU without knowing one thing about Mormons--is dumber than a sack of bricks, isn't he?

8/14/24, 11:25 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) That's pretty much my thought process with anyone who attends BYU that isn't Mormon. It's like I hear news stories about how LGBT students are upset that up pride mural or something was destroyed and at the school's not doing anything about it. Or how a student was close to completing college or had their degree retracted because they broke the code of conduct by engaging in homosexual acts but they're claim was that they had no knowledge of this. It's like did you not do any research on BYU before you applied. So that aspect is kind of based around that. However it is possible for people not to know about more missionaries I was in my early twenties and didn't really know of them at all. In fact when I met them I could only remember him as Mormon missionaries and nothing really else. So when I went to look deeper I was only getting information of how Mormon missionaries live. It wasn't till after meeting him, finding a video and reference to them on my YouTube and having the same Mormon missionaries walk across my room when I was in the ER that I agree to talk to him. Thinking it was a sign and seeing as I hadn't been religious for a few years and seeing how crappy my life was took it as a sign. The conversation he has without her goodie when he comes out is kind of similar to mine except my missionaries didn't seem fazed by it at all and made me feel very welcome as did everyone in the church. In fact they even introduced me to a guy who is raised in the church and was openly gay himself. Even emitted in front of the missionaries and Deacon that he was actively pursuing a relationship with a man and who's going to take the teachings from the church and apply it to his relationship and marriage to a man. It wasn't until I moved out to Arizona and then a few years later in 2016 that I really saw the ugly side of those people and left the church.
Anonymous
8/14/24, 9:38 AM
Hope Chapter 6 is coming soon! Really want to see what Bradley's future holds for him. A buffet of black cock.
Anonymous
8/14/24, 8:36 AM
Eager to see where this goes
8/14/24, 8:32 AM
This isna brillant piece of work ! Thank YOU so much ! Leather, cigar and submission have always been huge fetishes of mine and I couldn't dreamt a better story ! This is absolutely perfect and the feelings, thoughts of the slave are so well-expressed. Thank YOU so much again
8/14/24, 3:00 AM
Great start. I hope that theres more side effect to the love bomb to Harry. Hope he get more attracted and submissive to Eli. And obv, Ben should also be love bombed.

8/14/24, 6:11 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you! I definitely want to play around with different versions of it for Harry specifically. And of course Ben will get a love bomb too, thinking of doing that for the next part of this story. Thanks for reading! <3
8/14/24, 5:21 AM
All right! Got us some pipe action, now!
Anonymous
7/18/24, 7:24 PM
Fantastic story; one of the best I've read here! Funny and hot and romantic, all brought together by your delightful style. Excellent job!

8/14/24, 4:54 AM
@Anonymous Thank you very much!
7/16/24, 1:05 AM
Wow. That was one of the finest erotic stories I've ever read. I really like intelligence with my erotic braintickling. Not to mention skillful writing and interesting thought-out characters. All the nice things said above - me, too. But in my case, I could humbly ask for some thinning out of the super-technical computer nerdfood section. It got so complicated that I just started to feel lost and afraid I'd have to give up and pass on the rest of the story. :-( I had to just...skim, hoping that the stuff for us non-programmers would poke through again, which it happily did. Perhaps keep all the What was done and Why but a lot less of the granular How? Anyway, something to consider for a possible next edit? Bravo!

8/14/24, 4:54 AM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Noted! On re-reading I do understand how it can be overwhelming jargon-wise. I'm a bit of a hard sci-fi geek and I think I approached it with just a touch too much of assumed knowledge. Part of the reason I had some cryptic mentions of YouTube videos (all of which are real!) was to try give some background info in case that area was entirely unfamiliar, but if I ever revisit this story this is definitely a critique I'll be following up on. Thank you for the kind words and for your perspective!
7/4/24, 5:07 PM
Very hot - and sweet - reality change story. I usually get off on the "meaner" side of the genre, but I really loved it : ) Thanks, LLOYD

8/14/24, 4:49 AM
@[Lloyd311](/user/show/13481) Thanks so much! I'm very glad that you got into this story despite the softer tone I ended up going for. Means a lot c: