Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/8/16, 9:42 AM
It's always a pleasure to read your work! I'm mostly gonna echo some cliches - e.g. take your time, real life first, quality over quickness etc. We'll see you again when we see you!
Anonymous
2/8/16, 8:09 AM
Damn hot, please continue!
Anonymous
2/8/16, 3:52 AM
Loved it! Reality change is terrific!
Nick
2/8/16, 1:03 AM
Really hot. Would love to have a guy do this to me.
Anonymous
2/8/16, 12:30 AM
Good job. Very good story. If anything I would maybe have add the sex part of it . It s like an orgasm building and building after each stroke but missing just that bit to explode .
Tempest
2/7/16, 11:23 PM
So far part 5 is amazing. I was so happy to see you had posted more! I check very often, it's like im addicted. I feel bad for Jack and Steven for what they went through and still are, but I'm so glad they're going to work it out! Hoyt seems like a know-it-all douche and I don't care for him, but you've kept his character interesting. I love reading your stories, great job on the beginning of this part! Btw, I've never really heard of the singer you keep mentioning, but I'll have a listen to his work. If these characters react to his words that deeply, it's definitely worth a listen. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read more!
Ruffcub
2/7/16, 8:22 PM
Love your work and glad to see you posting again bro!
rodready
2/7/16, 8:13 PM
Pleased yur back, bro. I can really relate to the tumblr shit yur postin, bro. Keep at it fella, yu r gonna be one perfect dumbass jock. Try to keep on writin shit, tho, even if its like way hard to concentrate.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
2/7/16, 7:34 PM
So good to be hypnotized. to not have to think, to have someone else tell you who your friends are and who you will play with.
Anonymous
2/7/16, 3:15 PM
Great premise! AI gone rogue to create mindless muscle clones! Better than "HAL" from "2001: A Space Odyssey"