Recent Comments

Apr 23, 2014
Anonymous
1/30/16, 2:01 AM
Thanks, This is one of my favourites.
Anonymous
1/29/16, 8:09 PM
So glad to have bubble back. I saw the original bubble on here, now I don't. I wish it were back along with the pink pill.
Anonymous51
1/29/16, 5:17 PM
Will there ever be a continuation of this story?
Jan 26, 2016
molsonbi
1/29/16, 5:10 PM
Thanks for responding back to our comments I wrote here before as to Travis and what happens next Hate to see him flushed away as something better should be in store for a natural but no matter what outcome love this story line I must be a natural too
Anonymous
1/29/16, 11:29 AM
Be careful with consistency. Eric Lauder was 40yo at first and then age changed to 32 a few lines later.
Anonymous
1/29/16, 7:40 AM
Would love to read the next chapter soon!
Anonymous
1/29/16, 5:44 AM
This was so hot. Thank you. Can't wait to see more from you and these characters.
Tempest
1/29/16, 3:40 AM
Your stories are absolutely amazing! I cannot begin to tell you of my reactions and emotions I've had while reading them. You literally had me crying when Andy "died". I was so infuriated because Paul had FINALLY found his one true love, but I'm so glad he's okay. I've never felt so strongly about a story or a character in my life. Personally, my outlook on life is very bleak. I honestly have no hope in finding my own soul mate, but as I've said before, your words give me hope. I can tell you're a very intelligent man by some of the words you've chosen to use, which makes the story a lot more enjoyable. I have absolutely no criticisms. Just keep writing and never stop because I never want to stop reading about Paul's adventures.