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Anonymous51
1/29/16, 5:17 PM
Will there ever be a continuation of this story?
Jan 26, 2016
molsonbi
1/29/16, 5:10 PM
Thanks for responding back to our comments I wrote here before as to Travis and what happens next Hate to see him flushed away as something better should be in store for a natural but no matter what outcome love this story line I must be a natural too
Anonymous
1/29/16, 11:29 AM
Be careful with consistency. Eric Lauder was 40yo at first and then age changed to 32 a few lines later.
Anonymous
1/29/16, 7:40 AM
Would love to read the next chapter soon!
Anonymous
1/29/16, 5:44 AM
This was so hot. Thank you. Can't wait to see more from you and these characters.
Tempest
1/29/16, 3:40 AM
Your stories are absolutely amazing! I cannot begin to tell you of my reactions and emotions I've had while reading them. You literally had me crying when Andy "died". I was so infuriated because Paul had FINALLY found his one true love, but I'm so glad he's okay. I've never felt so strongly about a story or a character in my life. Personally, my outlook on life is very bleak. I honestly have no hope in finding my own soul mate, but as I've said before, your words give me hope. I can tell you're a very intelligent man by some of the words you've chosen to use, which makes the story a lot more enjoyable. I have absolutely no criticisms. Just keep writing and never stop because I never want to stop reading about Paul's adventures.
A RE-EDUCATED FAN !
1/29/16, 1:52 AM
Gosh, Golly, Gee Wiz, ....How much longer must we wait ? Edlam, are you sure your name isn't really Alex ???? Your treating us all the way he's treating Jake...Don't be a 'Bully'....please find the time to print chapter eight...Thank you in advance....
Anonymous
1/29/16, 12:38 AM
Holy crap - this is hot and fucked up, haha
Anonymous
1/28/16, 10:50 PM
The author's website, http://hypnoticsubjugation.tumblr.com, has only recently being updated, so I presume he had something important that occupied his attention. Maybe his Master called :D