Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/24/16, 4:59 AM
At least part 2 wasn't exactly a rehash of part 1, but....oh, the dialogue is laughably like a 1950s sci-fi B-film. If you could redo the story with making the alien *seduce* Gary rather than just convert him immediately (and then have Gary elaborate that as he converts Steve), it could improve the story.
anon reader
1/24/16, 1:55 AM
a nice ending! I'm so happy for paul who have found love. It's different in an artistic sense where most stories here are all about taking what they want out of selfishness. The fact that Paul was able to keep his morals is something of a refresher here in this site! I give all the praises to you because of finishing not just one, but three stories! Congratulations and good day to you!
Anonymous
1/24/16, 12:29 AM
Wish there were images to go with this
mw-scot
1/23/16, 8:22 PM
I originally started this when the original Bubble series was still on NCMC, but didn't want to continue and finish it without the original authors permission. Thankfully he has made contact and is quite happy for more Bubble stories to be published (and any of his originals to be re-uploaded if anybody has a copy!), so here's the finished story. Thanks, MW.
Anonymous
1/23/16, 7:54 PM
The sister's boyfriend!! That's a good one.
fan
1/23/16, 5:50 PM
seriously, this has been one of the best 'feel good' stories I've read! It's just so heartwarming that Paul is using his power for good. I know nothing sexy happened this chapter, but from a story's point of view, this has been superb! Especially with character development. Good job and keep it up!
anon reader
1/23/16, 5:43 PM
I really like this story and the unfolding drama. I also appreciate the fact that throughout the story so far, Paul is keeping his morality and good character in tact. This is actually very refreshing, especially in this site! It makes me think that good things will happen to Paul because of his good character! Excellent work and good day to you! :D
Anonymous
1/23/16, 4:08 PM
Do you have a blog or website where we can look at your old stories? Most of them are locked behind that dumb malebots website right?
Jan 22, 2016
Jamie
1/23/16, 3:21 PM
Awesome story!!! Hope very much you write more :D
Anonymous
1/23/16, 3:07 PM
Any chance it'll reach 100% by this week?